VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

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Today we focused on:

Had conversation about some specific things she needs to do at work. Focused on upgrading vocabulary to find other ways to say things in a more professional way

Grammar

Did you get chance by checking this up with bank? – did you get the chance to check this with the bank

make a payment / send a payment / pay sb 

Vocabulary

I’m afraid / Unfortunately – introduce sth negative

they didn’t show the name they left the name off the document 

they asked them to get back the container asked them to return the container / to ensure the container was returned / to have the container returned

moreover / furthermore / additionally / on top of this 

in-between – in the middle area of 2 things
eg. the cup sits in-between the teacher and student.
between – in-between / connecting 2 things
eg. the relationship between husband and wife is very strong

I am very strong – muscles / emotions
I treat you strongly – xiong de
Our relationship is strong – hard to break

hope – sth you can expect / real / could happen
wish – not really possible / unlikely / impossible

however: I wish you a merry Christmas = “i hope you have a good Christmas”

Writing exercise

Dear Matthias,
Dear Elisabeth,

Did you get a / the chance to check (on) this / follow up on this with the bank? Or did you receive any feedback from the bank on the document supplementary issue?
It will soon be 3 weeks / it has almost been 3 weeks since the payment was submitted at your end. We’re still not receiving it / we’ve still not received it at our end which means we still have not been paid, and on top of this, I’m not getting your reply / I still have not been receiving any replies from you.
This leaves me with no choice other than to flag your account as a long time open account and being slow on communication.
Surely this will result in an operating difficulties between your office and our export department. I hope you can understand that I have my duty to cover / that I have a job to do, and I need your attention on this urgent issue.

With my best regards
Laura Zhao
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From: CSM-SHA/ Foreign Account
Subject: FW: Updated information of held funds – RE: CES-HAM STMT UPTO MAY , 2019′ FOR CHINA SEA GROUP
Importance: High

Dear Elisabeth,

We pushed our bank for more information. Herewith the feedback.
The said intermediary bank is Deutsche Bank USA. Also quoted from our bank – the funds are being held due to the review of anti-money laundering formality issue.
Normally your bank would have informed your office of the kind of documents which shall be surrendered for further clarification.

I hope the supplementary information is helpful and looking forward to your attention and reply shortly. Thanks.

With my best regards
Laura Zhao