VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Check Hades’ writing next class and get him to read it to you so you can write it down, then correct it together.

I like my lego class. Thursday after school I can went to the lego class. Lego teacher teachs us making many thing for example animals, plane, car. I like making animals but I don’t making an animal. I making a dinosaur. It like giraffe, have a long neck but its neck is taller than the giraffes neck. I like the dinosaur very much. I like the lego class and I like the lego teacher.

I like my lego class. Thursday after school I can go to the lego class. The / My lego teacher teaches us how to make many things for example animals, planes, and cars. I like making animals but I don’t make an animal. I make a dinosaur. It is like a giraffe, because it has a long neck but its neck is longer than the giraffe’s neck. I like this dinosaur very much. I like the lego class and I like the lego teacher.

Mid autumn festival. I like mid-fall festival because in the mid-fall festival we can eat moon cakes. We can looking the full moon at the window which we are happy. Mid-fall festival is a very happy and very fun festival. We can do many things in the mid-fall festival. I like mid-fall festival very very much.

Mid autumn festival. I like mid-fall festival because at this time we can eat moon cakes. We can look at the full moon out of window which makes us very happy. Mid-fall festival is a very happy and very fun time. We can do many things in the mid-fall festival. I like it very very much.

Today I and my mother, father and brother went to the zoo. We see the giraffes. Giraffes neck is very long. I like it. Then we see the elephant. Elephant is very big and its nose is very long and then we see the tiger. Tigrs like eating meat, so we see the tigers are very very scared. Today I see very much animals, elephant, giraffes, zebras, tigers, lions, hippos. We are very happy.

Today my mother, father, brother and I went to the zoo. We saw giraffes. Their necks are very long. I like their long necks / which I like. . Then we saw the elephant which is very big and its nose is very long. Then we saw the tiger. Tigers like eating meat, so when we saw the tigers we were very very scared. Today I saw very many animals, including elephants, giraffes, zebras, tigers, lions, and hippos. We were very happy.

My spaceship is very big and tall. It can fly in the sky very well, so I can beat the aliens very good. Do you know the aliens? They are green. They are very small but they are terrible. Aliens is in the moon because they like the moon. Why do I beat the aliens? Because they destroy the earth.

My spaceship is very big and tall. It can fly in the sky very well, so I can beat the aliens very well. Do you know the aliens? They are green and they are very small but they are terrible. Aliens are on the moon because they like the moon. Why do I beat the aliens? Because they destroy the earth.

Grammar

the tiger is very scary = we are scared of tigers

how much money?
how many tigers?

see – saw – seen

I am doing it / I am making it

I do it / I make it