VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Writing exercise

Hi Justin and Quinn,

Please find above deep fryers with comparable spec and below reply for your information.

o Better heat retention: It can be done by adding the timer dial on the control panel, however, it will increase the cost and require tooling fee.
o Increased metal thickness: The thickness our vendor usually do is 0.4mm, if you would like to increase the thickness, they can push it to 0.5mm.
o Explore cord length/connections for improved functionality: The cord length our vendor usually do is around 65cm. The UL safety regulation is between 60 to 70 cm. Also, could you please be more specific about how you would like to improve the cord connections?
o Higher quality handles: Most of the deep fryers in the market are with plastic handles. Could you please be more specific about how you would like to improve the handle?
o Improve drain functionality: Vendor can add the faucet drain on the fryer, however, again, it will increase the cost and require tooling fee.

Thanks.

Hi Justin and Quinn,

Please find above the deep fryers with comparable specs and the below reply for your information.

o Better heat retention: It can be done by adding the timer dial on the control panel, however, it will increase the cost and require a tooling fee.
o Increased metal thickness: The thickness our vendor usually uses is 0.4mm, if you would like to increase the thickness, they can push it to 0.5mm.
o Explore cord length/connections for improved functionality: The cord length our vendor usually uses is around 65cm. The UL safety regulation is between 60 to 70 cm. Also, could you please be more specific about how you would like to improve the cord connections?
o Higher quality handles: Most of the deep fryers in the market are with plastic handles. Would it be possible for you to / I was wondering if you could / It would be great if you could be more specific / give more details about how you would like to improve the handle.
o Improve drain functionality: Vendor can add the faucet drain on the fryer, however, again, it will increase the cost and require a tooling fee.

Thanks.

Vocabulary

however = but
eg. I like coffee but / however if I drink too much, I can’t sleep
eg2. I like coffee and I drink it every day. However, yesterday I had too much.
sincebecause = as = due to the fact that
eg. I drink coffee since / because / as it tastes good
eg2. Since / As coffee tastes good, I drink it every day.
while / whilst = even though
while / whilst = at the same time

appreciate 
eg. I really appreciate it (like it)

I will dispatch the package tomorrow at around noon. Please let me know once received. (once you have received it)

Please let me know the info after confirming with the 3rd party. (after you have confirmed with the 3rd party)

really a few < few < a few / not many < quite a few < many < quite a lot / heaps / tons

provide / offer / send / give
provide sth to sb / provide sb with sth
offer sth to sb / offer sb sth (give / send)

nothing in common 
eg. we have nothing in common

Pronunciation

courier – Koo ree er 
career – Kah reer
carrier – Ka ree ah

towel – tao wel
tower – tao wer

world – were rel d 
word – were d
wall – wor l