VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Writing exercise

if I am speaking honestly,I don’t think a woman can do better than a man in the top position like president or company leader, even I am a woman.
As we all know that woman’s biology is different to man’s and sometime it is an advantage but sometime it isn’t. If a woman goes to the presidential competition then she and her team always emphasize female’s gentler and gender equality. It will get some female and some ruoshiqunti s’ supporting because the female wants to have gender equality and the ruoshiqunti are wish for care.
Of course, a female president will pay more attention to them but in front of one country’s overall development it is a very little thing. The president should have more strategy thinking and pays more attention of the whole, but most of women always like to focus on some details and their logical thinking determine their geju.
Maybe some people will say that the most of leaders are male because of sexism but my opinion is the most important reason is nature of gender. Male has more hongguan(macroscopical) thinking abilities and they have more sprits. Sometimes they have more aggressiveness than women and I think for people who at the top position to do management or development these abilities and nature are advantages.
Sometimes the people’s ability and character decide their job and position and it doesn’t relate to gender, because of the nature of man and woman the job type will divided by gender obviously.

if I am speaking honestly,I don’t think a woman can do better than a man in the top position like president or company leader, even though I am a woman.
As we all know that woman’s biology is different to man’s and sometime it is an advantage but sometime it isn’t. If a woman goes to the presidential election then she and her team always emphasize female’s gentler and gender equality. It will get some female and some low income earners’ supporting because the female wants to have gender equality and low income earners wish to be cared for.
Of course, a female president will pay more attention to them but in front of one country’s overall development it is a very little thing. The president should have more strategic thinking and pay more attention to the whole, but most women always like to focus on details and their lack of logical thinking affects their ability to have a clear structure.
Maybe some people will say that most leaders are male because of sexism but my opinion is the most important reason is nature of gender. Males have a more broad way of thinking and they have more spirit / determination. Sometimes they have more aggressiveness than women and I think for people who at the top position to do management or development these abilities and nature are at an advantage / in an advantageous position.
Sometimes people’s ability and character decide their job and position and it doesn’t relate to gender, and because of the nature of man and woman the job type will be divided by gender clearly.

Grammar

the people …. = the people in China
people = all people
people in china = all people in china

the weather (in shanghai)

beautiful girls
presidents
the president

everyone
all people
every person
all women
some women
some of the women

Vocabulary

in these yearsthese days 

implied – sth you don’t need to say, the person can guess what you mean

determine = to think, analyse, know, decide
decide = to plan to do

i dont know which word fits / which word is more suitableÂ