VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]
Robin / Reid / Remi
Nathan / Nolan
Writing exercise
The first 2 years in Fudan university he was still a good student and liked to social with others. He started to chase beautiful girl but with he had a girlfriend some problems appeared. Because his girlfriend who is beautiful and easier to attract other boys, every time they went to restaurant, he should order a lot of food which is expensive as well. Then he decided to end this relationship because of his limited pin money. What a senseful boy he wasļ¼He gave up his xurongxin and chose his real life.
With time goes by, he was going to graduate and he faced a very serious problem. At that time when you graduated from university you needed to go back to your hometown and you couldn’t find a job in other cities. Most of his classmates went back to their hometown if they had some relationship in there, but he didnāt have. Obviously, if he went back that equal to he never went to Shanghai. He didnāt want this result and the only one solution was continuing to study to get master degree.
Because he didnāt study hard in later 2 years and it was difficult for his score to pass the master examination. But he didnāt give up and decided to catch up. The master major which he wanted to was different of his bachelor major and it means a lot of knowledge he didnātāt learn before. He asked many students who were tops in different subject of that major for help. Because he spent most of time in social in later 2 years, everyone was happy to help him. They taught him the core concept and shared their notes to him, even told him their teacherās preference and guess the examination questions.
After 3 monthsā effort, he just passed the mark but he wasnāt admitted since someone use his relationship to qualified.
To be continueā¦.
The first 2 years in Fudan university he was still a good student and liked to be social / socialise with others. He started to chase beautiful girls but with him having a girlfriend some problems appeared. Every time he and his girlfriend, who is beautiful and easy to attract other boys, went to restaurant, he should order a lot of food which was expensive as well. Then he decided to end this relationship because of his limited pocket money. What a sensible boy he wasļ¼He gave up his vanity / flashy lifestyle and chose his real life.
As time went by / with the passing of time, he was going to graduate and he faced a very serious problem. At that time when you graduated from university you needed to go back to your hometown and you couldn’t find a job in other cities. Most of his classmates went back to their hometown if they had some relationship in there, but he didnāt have any. Obviously, if he went back that would equal to him never having gone to Shanghai / would mean he never went to Shanghai in the first place. He didnāt want this result and the only one solution was continuing to study to get a master degree.
As / Since he didnāt study hard in the last 2 years and it was difficult for his score to pass the masters entrance examination. However, he didnāt give up and decided to catch up. The master major which he wanted to learn was different to his bachelor major and it meant a lot of knowledge that he didnāt learn before. He asked many students who were theĀ top of different subject of that major for help. Because he spent most of the time socialising in the last 2 years, everyone was happy to help him. They taught him the core concept and shared their notes with him, and even told him their teacherās preference and guess the examination questions.
After 3 monthsā effort, he just passed but he wasnāt admitted since someone used their relationship to qualify.
To be continueā¦.
That drink is tops! = that drink is the best drink out of all drinks
Every time he and his girlfriend, who is beautiful and easy to attract other boys, went to restaurant, he should order a lot of food which is expensive as well. = Because his girlfriend was beautiful and attracted other boys really easily, every time they went to a restaurant they had to spend a lot…
Ran Nou
integrity
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