VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Writing exercise

I went to Korea for Shinhwa concert on national holiday. Shinhwa is an original idol group in Korea and they made by the most famous entertainment company SM. SM is called idol factory, they have made a lot of Korean pop stars like EXO, Girls Generation. Etc.
Shinhwa was grouped in 1998, this concert is their 20th anniversary concert. 5 years later, I went to Korea again. In these 5 years, I married and had a son. So many things changed and so many things happened. When I sat in the concert site and when Shinhwa members appeared on the stage with the music sounded, I cried. A lot of memories and feelings mingled together and I felt happy with sad at that time.
After 2 days concerts, I decided that I should continue to keep my preferences and go after my own life. These will let me happy.

I went to Korea for Shinhwa concert during the national holiday. Shinhwa is an original idol group in Korea and they were made / established / put together / created by the most famous entertainment company SM. SM is called idol factory and they have made a lot of Korean pop stars like EXO, Girls Generation. Etc.
Shinhwa was started in 1998, and this concert is their 20th anniversary concert. 5 years later, I went to Korea again. In these 5 years, I married and had a son. So many things changed and so many things happened. When I sat in the concert site and when Shinhwa members appeared on the stage with the music sounded, I cried. A lot of memories and feelings mingled together and I felt happy and sad at that time.
After 2 days concerts, I decided that I should continue to keep my preferences and go after my own life. This decision / these ideas / these things / this made me happy! / I think that these changes in my life are helping to make me happy and a better person. 

Feelings and memories of mine were mingled together which made me feel both happy and sad at the same time.

Grammar

Making Sentences

[ Idea + Details ] ___CONJUNCTION___ [ Idea + Details ]

[ I come to Smart English + to study English + with Jesse ]__BECAUSE __[ I think English is important + for me + to improve myself. ]

I come to Smart English and / so I think my life is happier than before

I have a student and she is really nice. 

I have a student (she is nice)

who + which

i not very careI don’t really care 

i always talk to him that if his attitude is goodI always tell him that if his attitude is good…

talk – to communicate with sb
speak – to communicate with sb / use a language
say – to use words “….”
tell – to give information with words

I talk to Yoyo every day
I speak to Yoyo every day
I speak English with Yoyo
I said that she was pretty
I said “you are pretty” to her
I tell her that she is pretty
I tell her “you are pretty”

he write finish 1 letter – he wrote 1 letter completely / he finished writing 1 letter

I don’t want him to be left behind 

i have a client beforei used to have a client