VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Do some writing focusing on noun / verb / connecting sentences.

My new business is about wedding dresses . When I prepared my own wedding, I found this business opportunities. I found all the girls are willing to pay a lot of money for the wedding dress. And they always rent or buy it very early,even a year earlier. Maybe since every girl thinks wedding is only once in a life time. It must be the most beautiful girl on her day. Also I am a designer, I am pretty interested in this thing,so I do it. Now most things are ready, we think more about marketing. The first step is to let people know us, then we can have a chance to provide the best service and offer more beautiful dresses. And we also can customize the dress for the guests. I believe I will do this job with passion and I hope it can become a great business.

My new business is about wedding dresses and when I prepared my own wedding, I found this business opportunity. I found most girls / all girls who are about to get married are willing to pay a lot of money for wedding dresses and they always rent or buy them very early, even a year earlier. Maybe since every girl thinks weddings are / her wedding is only once in a life time, they must be the most beautiful girls on their day. Also, I am a designer, therefore I am pretty interested in this thing, so I do it. Now most things are ready, so we think more about marketing. The first step is to let people know us, then, we can have a chance to provide the best service and offer more beautiful dresses. One of our strengths is that we also can customize dresses for guests which I think is really important. I believe I will do this job with passion and I hope it can become a great business.

Grammar

what is the weather like today?
it’s too hot

noun – which one / how many
verb – what time

I went to the park to read a book / because I wanted to read a book
I went to the park and read a book

i have a friend who is called Yannis

i have a computer  which is black

i had 3 classes today that / which was tiring

Vocabulary

because / since / as / due to the fact that
because of / due to
but / however
so / therefore

he doesn’t care about her – talking about the cat

cold < > warm – personality
eg. some cats are a little cold but dogs are warmer

cool – positive / like a rock star

2 years ago < > in 2 years – from now in the past and future