VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]
Writing exercise
This is social media age. People spend too much time on social media every day. They browse we chat moment again and again and post every piece of their life on it. They like to show off about their quality life and possessions (cars, luxury bags, journey).
When I was more junior, I used to post my life on social media frequently as well and shared the moods more than goods. But now I don’t like to do it anymore because I don’t want to expose my life to any other people. My daily life is my own life, I enjoy my cate and my journey, carry my bags any wear my dresses, I play with my son and take him to abroad. I don’t need to use the business class and luxury hotel pictures to show off my life, enjoying it with my family is enough, unnecessary to let other people to know my happiness or sadness, every mood I should bear it alone.
I think I grew up.
This is the social media age / the age of social media. People spend too much time on social media every day. They browse we chat moments again and again and post every piece of their life on it. They like to show off about their quality life and possessions & experiences (cars, luxury bags, journey).
When I was younger, I used to post my life on social media frequently as well and shared my moods more than my things / possessions. But now I don’t like to do it anymore because I don’t want to expose my life to any other people. My daily life is my own life, I enjoy my delicious food and my journey, carry my bags any wear my dresses, I play with my son and take him abroad. I don’t need to use the business class and luxury hotel pictures to show off my life. Enjoying it with my family is enough, and it is unnecessary to let other people to know my happiness or sadness. I believe that every mood I should bear alone.
I think I have grown up.
Grammar
at – the point / general place
eg. I am at the park / at starbucks
on – on top
in – inside
I do / I grow – time is not important
I did / I grew – time is very important – past
I have done / I have grown – time is not important – past
I had done / I had grown up – past of another past time
Vocabulary
that style client – that style of client
she should suit that – she should adapt to her environment – to make yourself suitable for sth
it’s very hard and tired – it’s hard and tiring
it is same – it is the same
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