VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Using electronic devices every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

Letting children to use electronic devices EVERYDAY can ONLY benefits children. Businessman and scientist spent their life time and fortune on the innovation of electronic devices for the purpose of better educated our next generation. It would be such a waste if we don’t let children use it. Below will be my reason why we should have let our children use it every day.

Firstly, as their senior, we should have spoiled children with lots of video and game because it makes them feel happy, which parent will be happy as well. A happy childhood is the treasure for each children’s life time because they will stay positive when they grow old. Secondly, electronic devices enable a greater opportunity for children to learn anything they want from the internet world, and the best part is parent no longer need to teach their children, but internet world will teach instead. All the knowledge will be the most up to date on the internet, even parents learn from it. Also, children will be able to practice the latest technology, and use the technology to help society become a better place to live in. Thirdly, parent will be able to enjoy more of their time and children don’t have to get annoyed by their parent. Most parent, especially mother, will lose their personal time after their children was born. Technology enable every parent to continue their career and life dream. Last but not the least, the world is full of suffering and miserable. By raising a children through electronic device, children do not have to face the real world they live in, but the unreal world in the screen, which they can build their own world in the video games, and be whoever they want to be on the internet chat.

Electronic device is the greatest invention in the 21th century, which will only help the future world getting better than before. Our next generation is lucky to have the electronic device, as parent may die one day, but device will be with them forever. Many people may argued that electronic device won’t be able to let children experience outdoor space or do more excise. I do believe in the future world, all the technology will solve these. Nintendo’s switch is the perfect example, because you can use it to dance or fishing through the screen. So parent, let’s embrace the change of the world and let children enjoy their electronic device!

Using electronic devices every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

Letting children to use electronic devices EVERYDAY can ONLY benefit children with businessmen and scientists spending their lifetimes and fortune on the innovation of electronic devices for the purpose of better education of / for our next generation. It would be such a waste if we don’t let children use it. Below will be my reasons why we should let our children (to) use it every day.

Firstly, as their senior, we should spoil children with lots of videos and games because it makes them feel happy, which means parents will be happy as well. A happy childhood is the treasure for each children’s lifetime because they will stay positive when / as they grow old / throughout their lifetime. Secondly, electronic devices enable a greater opportunity for children to learn anything they want from the online world, and the best part is parents no longer need to teach their children, but the online world will teach them instead. All of the knowledge online is the most up to date, with even parents learning from it. Also, children will be able to practice using the latest technology, and use the technology to help society become a better place to live in with the sharing of knowledge being . Thirdly, parents will be able to enjoy more of their time and children don’t have to get annoyed by their parents. Most parents, especially mothers, will lose their personal time after their children were born. Technology enables every parent to continue their career and life dream. Last but not least, the world is full of suffering and miserable. By raising a children through electronic devices, children do not have to face the real world they live in, but the unreal world in the screen, in which they can build their own world, and be whoever they want to be on online chat.

Electronic devices are the greatest invention / innovation in the 21st century, which will only help the future world get better than before. Our next generation is lucky to have electronic devices, as parents will die one day, but devices will be with them forever. Many people may argue that electronic devices won’t be able to let children experience the outdoors or do more excise. However, I do believe in the future world, all the technology will solve these issues. Nintendo’s switch is the perfect example, because you can use it to dance or fish through the screen. So parents, let’s embrace the change of the world and let children enjoy their electronic devices!

when you grow old, you will be weak and tired
as you grow old, you will become more mature etc.

trust sb / rely on sb

picks up on everything you say – analyse everything you say

put my situation awkward – put me in an awkward situation 

utilise this contacts – to use sth to your advantage

there’s a few things i need to sort it out – sort out 

ballpark figure – rough estimate

save a lot of my times – time