VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Writing exercise

I visited Shanghai Natural History Museum for the first time with my daughter last week which located in the downtown. The building very classic and had 4 floors. There had lots of animal and plant samples that were made by real animals and plants. It was a wonderful place to direct learning about history of natural.If you want to find a good place for children, I suggest you to go there.

I visited Shanghai Natural History Museum, which is located downtown, for the first time with my daughter last week. The building is very classic and has 4 floors. There are lots of animal and plant samples that were made of real animals and plants. It was a wonderful place to directly learn about history of nature. If you want to find a good place for children, I suggest you (to) go there.


every people – everyone

will have the developing – will have development 

they have no any time to focus on others – i don’t have any time to focus on others

here / there / down / up … don’t need “in” / “on” / “at”

made of / from = the materials
made by = who made it / the process of making it

downtown = practice  saying “dowen towen”

reject – to say “no”
eg. if your visa gets rejected you lose your money

application
eg. you submit your application and then get accepted

paperwork
eg. you need to do some paperwork

construction – gong di
eg. Shanghai is one big construction site