VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [S]

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there are 2 girls on the snow. They are friends. They are talking and walking. The girl on the right has a snowball in her hands. They want to make a snowman so they put a snowman hat on snowman head because snowman is cold. On the snowman’s face they put a nose and eyes and mouth and put a scarf on snowman neck because snowman is cold. And then they go to home. Sun comes out and then snowman becomes water.

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there are 2 girls on the snow and they are friends. They are talking and walking. The girl on the right has a snowball in her hands. They want to make a snowman so they put a snowman‘s hat on the snowman‘s head because the snowman is cold. On the snowman’s face they put a nose, eyes, mouth and put a scarf around the snowman‘s neck because the snowman is cold. And then they go home. The sun comes out and then the snowman becomes water.