VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [S]

Focus on past tense – get her to talk about her day and other things using past tense

Birthday party | Candles | Blow out | Balloons | Excited | Wish

Introduction

Who: Linay and her mother
When: In the evening at Linay’s birthday party
Where: At home
Want to do: make a cake for Linay’s birthday party

Body

Story: In the evening Linay was in the school but now it was evening. Her mother and her sister will make her birthday party. First her mother used the candles on the cake and then she went outside buy some balloons and Linay was so excited. Then, their mother and her sister said to her “please blow out the candles and wish a wish”, so Linay wished she want to be a mermaid and her mother and sister will be the mermaid too.

Conclusion

Learn: she learned if she goes home she has many surprises
Feel: she felt so happy
And then: she went to her friend’s house

One day a girl named Linay and her mother were at home because it was Linay’s birthday party. They wanted to make a cake for the party. In the evening Linay was in the school but now it was evening. Her mother and her sister will make her birthday party. First her mother used the candles on the cake and then she went outside buy some balloons and Linay was so excited. Then, their mother and her sister said to her “please blow out the candles and wish a wish”, so Linay wished she want to be a mermaid and her mother and sister will be the mermaid too. She learned if she goes home she has many surprises. She was so happy after the party so she went to her friend’s house to play. 

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