VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [S]

Do some writing about the land of stories but focus on:

past tense
she / he / it / name has 
I / we / they / you have
connect ideas with because / and / but / so / which 

peak hour / rush hour – after work / school when everyone is going home it’s very busy

the US / the USA / the states / America

i have take – i have taken

give you to see – show you

wax – what comes from a candle when you burn it

drip – one drop of water falling
eg. The water is dripping from the roof.
trickle – a small amount of water falling together
eg. The water trickles down your face in the shower.

I read the land of stories and it is about 2 children go inside to the past and I read the beginning of the story. It is like 2 children are attending class and it is about fairytale. The next day it was their birthday. Their grandmother came to their home and give them presents and one of the presents is a very good book called the land of stories and when they want to go to sleep the girl called “Alex” find out that the book is humming and sometimes have a loud sound so at the weekend and weekend she always act strange and every day she used to have a good score but those days, like this week, she only have 0 score and she always don’t pass the exam and she used to learn many things in the class and like the class but this week she didn’t know anything and the teacher ask her she didn’t say anything and she lied to the teacher so her brother connor want to find out what’s happening and he find out that she’s carrying the land of stories to her school. Connor was used to sleep in the class but this week he thought that his sister was acting like him and the girl used to raise her hand every time and Connor used to raise his hand only a few time and this weeks Connor raise his hand every time and Connor said that the boy who cried wolf means his parents must look after him.

I read the land of stories and it is about 2 children who go into the past and I read the beginning of the story. It is about 2 children who are attending class and it is about fairy-tales. The day after they attended their fairy-tale class it was their birthday. Their grandmother came to their home and gave them presents and one of the presents was a very good book called the land of stories and when they wanted to go to sleep the girl called “Alex” found out that the book was humming and sometimes had a loud sound so at the weekend / on the weekend and weekdays she always acts strange and every day she used to get good scores but those days, she only got 0 and she could never pass the exam and she used to learn many things in class and enjoyed it but this week she didn’t know anything and when the teacher asked her she didn’t say anything and she lied to the teacher so her brother Conner wanted to find out what was happening and he found out that she was carrying the land of stories to school. Conner used to sleep in the class but this week he thought that his sister was acting like him and the girl used to raise her hand every time but Conner used to raise his hand only a few times and this weeks Conner raised his hand every time and he said that the boy who cried wolf means his parents must look after him.

past tense
she / he / it / name has 
I / we / they / you have
connect ideas with because / and / but / so / which