VIP Class Notes (Jesse)

Introduction

who: 3 girls and a boy – Jessica, Athena, Judy, Nick. – the girls are 13 and Nick is 50, Nick is the father of Jessica, Athena and Judy are Jessica’s friends.

situation: they are having a good day at the beach in the afternoon

Body

They wake up together and they go to wake up Nick to go swimming. They drive a car to go to the sea and look at the beach. They make a sandcastle which was so big. They listen to the radio and they can listen to something about today. Jessica can’t swim, so her friend Judy said “don’t be scared”, you can get it! The water is very cold and cool.

Conclusion

Jessica can’t swim but today she was so happy because she made a sandcastle which was so big so she was happy and her friends were happy too. They eat salad for dinner at the beach and have a really happy night.

One afternoon, 3 girls named Jessica, Athena, and Judy, and a 50 year old called Nick go to the beach to play in the water and eat dinner together.

The girls wake up together and they go to wake up Nick to go swimming at the beach. They drive a car to go to the sea and look at the beach. They make a sandcastle which was so big. They listen to the radio and they can listen to something about today. Jessica can’t swim, so her friend Judy said “don’t be scared”, you can get it! The water is very cold and cool.

Jessica can’t swim but today she was so happy because she made a sandcastle which was so big so she was happy and her friends were happy too. They eat salad for dinner at the beach and have a really happy night.