VIP Class Notes (Jacob) [S]

Learn and write about different personality characteristics: loyal, reliable, charismatic, friendly, social, etc.

Vocabulary

Doable – something that can be done

Various – many different kinds of something
eg. At the gym, there is various workout machines classes.

Grammar

I need to make every word

I want to become familiar = I want to familiarize myself

Original 

Because I think design is creative work which is not like government work. Its not like you do the same work everyday. I feel like I would like to choose some creative work. Another reason is that I have learned drawing for more then 10 years. My major for my college is interior design so I choose this kind of work.

Edited

Because I think design is creative work which is not like government work. Its not like you do the same work everyday. I feel like I would like to choose some kind of creative work. Another reason is that I have learned drawing for more then 10 years. My major for at/in my college is interior design so I chose this kind of work.

Original + Edited (while speaking)

My first day at work, I did not do much many things. Because every new man employee goes to the office on the first day. The main thing is to familiarize their selves with the company routine. So the first day for new employees is easy. There was not much work to do. I think the most important thing on my first day was adding my colleagues wechat.

The main thing is to become more familiar with the company routine.

Original 

The person who I would like to similar with is my colleague. She is the most beautiful girl in my office. Model is her first job and after that she chose design to be her second job. I remember my first day when I went to the office I met her and after that we changed our wechat and became friends. The most deep impress for me is her smile and personality. I would like to be the kind of person who is outgoing charming.

Edited

The person who I would like to similar with is my colleague. She is the most beautiful girl in my office. Modeling was her first job and after that she chose design to be her second job. I remember my first day when I went to the office and I met her and. After that we exchanged our wechat and became friends. The most deep impression for me is her smile and personality. I would like to be the kind of person who is outgoing and charming like her.