VIP Class Notes (Jacob)

Original+Student corrections

I have three roommates that major in the same subject as me. Actually we are in the same class. We often eat together and go to do some exercise like playing badminton. But I love those guys. We study together and play PUBG.

Edited

I have three roommates that major in the same subject as me. Actually, we are in the same class. We often eat together and go to do some exercise like playing badminton. I love those guys.  and we enjoy studying together and playing PUBG.

Original+Student corrections

Yes of course. I certainly consider that. We should respect old people. Old people always have wisdom and sensitivity. They have made great contributions to our society. To honor them, we should respect them for things they have done and respecting them is a good virtue in many countries. So I think it is important to respect the elderly.

Edited

Yes of course. I certainly consider think that we should respect old people. The elderly always have more wisdom and life experience. They have made great contributions to our society. We should honor them for things they have done. Respecting them is a good virtue in many countries. So I think it is important to respect the elderly.

Always makes me

video game

which make a big effect – had a big effect

transmit human beings to mars – transport humans

He is a little big fat – he is a little overweight 

I remember him easily – I can remember him easily

this fact make made me a little excited (past tense)

adept at communication skills – Has adept communication skills

study playing video games together (separate activities) – Studying and playing

he is an impressed person I met – an  impressive person I’ve met

Hard vowels –

Ape/Meet

Pronunciation