VIP Class Notes (George)[W]

write a paragraph about Ironman

we focused on writing

the crodiles are big animal, they can live in the water and they can walk on the grass. they like eating fish or other animals, sometimes they can eat people, they have big mouth and long tail but they’re legs are very short, they can’t run fast.

the elephten are very strong, they only eat grass or fruit, they have big boday, they have a long nose, the nose look like the people’s hands, they can take everything.

Peter is a student. he is only twenty years old, he is Spiderman in the funturn . his friend don’t Peter is Spiderman, he think Peter is only a student, peter’s friend help Peter everything, because he like superman, rionman teach Peter what can he do, rionman is superman’s uncle

the crocodiles are big animals, they can live in the water and they can walk on the grass. they like eating fish or other animals, sometimes they can eat people, they have a big mouth and long tail but their legs are very short, they can’t run fast.

the elephants are very strong, they only eat grass or fruit, they have a big boday, they have a long nose, the nose looks like/can do the same as human’s arm and hands, because it can take everything.

Peter is a student. he is only twenty years old, he is Spiderman in the future . his friend doesn’t know that Peter is Spiderman, he think that Peter is only a student, peter’s friend help him with everything, because he like Spiderman, ironman teach Peter what can he do, ironman is Spiderman’s uncle