VIP Class Notes (George)[S/R]

Speaking

recently i plan to get a master degree so i will join online master program, and this program will start next week , and i have to watch videos every week, and they put the video online, i have write some code about data analysis , so i have to do a lot of homework and need submit it timely / in time.

my hobbies are simple, after lunch my husband and i like walk around shanghai streets and exercise, every year i plan travel one or two times, usually i plan the schedule 3 or 4 months before the travel, i check the airplane ticket and find the cheapest airline ticket based on the itinerary of the ticket i book the hotel on Booking website, usually when i decide when i travel in the city, will buy a book which named lonely planet , it’s series book and every city have one book and i will read the content in this book about this city and the city history and the sight seen of the city and based on the schedule the book advised and i will book the hotel.

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recently i’m planing to get a master degree, so i will join an online program which starts next week, and i have to watch an online videos every week, and i have to write codes based on these videos about data analysis, there for i have to do a lot of homework and submit it online in a timely fashion/ on time.

my hobbies are simple, usually/ everyday my husband and i like to walk around shanghai streets and exercise. every year i plan to travel/ a trip once or twice. usually i plan the schedule 3 or 4 months in advance. i check the flight tickets and choose the cheapest rate. and based on the ticket’s dates i book the hotel online through Booking.com/ Booking website. in every city i go to / in every destination i travel to, usually i will buy a book about this city, in every city around the world there is a series of books called Lonely Planet talking about the history, the sight seeing and all the touristic activities in this city.

as per our conversation/ discussion yesterday, we tried to find a way….

can we follow the rules that we discussed yesterday?