VIP Class Notes (George) [W+S]

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Hi everyone, I am a cute little pink pig. My name is Peppa Pig, I look very adorable. There are 5 people in my family, my grandpa, my grandma, my mom, my dad, and me. We live in Jing An District in Shanghai.Every morning I have to study in animal school. In the afternoon before my parents come pick me up I do the seaweed dance with my friends.

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Hey there everyone, I’m Peppa Pig nice to meet you OINK OINK!  I’m the cutest little pig you’ve ever seen. Let me tell you a little bit about myself. I live in Jing An District  with my  family, there are 5 of us.  My grandpa, my grandma, my mom, my dad, and me.Every morning I wake up at 7 oclock to go to animal school. Before my parents come pick me up in the afternoon, my friends and I always do the seaweed dance together. This always put a smile on our faces OINK OINK!

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Store

Peppa pig go to the store. First she go to the clothezes store. She buys a new dresses for herself and buys a bunch of flower for her mom. She also bought a toy dinosaur for her little brother George. Then she go tot he bakery. Because of the grandpas birthday she buys a beautiful chocolate cake. What a wonderful time.

Swimming Pool

It’s summer vacation. Peppa’s goes to the swimming pool with his little brother George. There are a lot of people in the swimming pool. George can’t swim but he plays water with Peppa. Peppa swims so fast, George is so surprised. After going to the swimming pool, they felt cool then.

KFC

One day Mother Pig go on a business so father pig, peppa, and george have to go to the KFC to have a dinner. First, father pig want to eat 4 chicken wings  and a bottle of cola, then peppa and george want to eat a chicken burger and some french fries it’s yummy but it isn’t nice for our healthy so father pig you have to learn how to cook then we can keep our health.

Oriental Pearl TV Tower

One day Peppa watched a show on the oriental pearl tv tower, and so they bought 4 tickets to go see it. There are many people beside the tower. Above their head they some sunshine on the highest pink circle ball.It’s shining  it’s so beautiful. Finally they see the show is nice and amazing.

Airport

In the vacation, Peppa’s family wants to go to the Beijing. They go to the airport. How big the airport is! There are some shops in it, looked his watch. He said it’s two hours to go the airport so they look for four seats. George and peppa play soome computer games. Mother big goes shopping for the kids she buys a bar of chocolate and the fat father pig take a rest on the seat

Classroom

Peppa has to go to school it’s the first day of go to the school. Students are happy because they can see their friends. Peppa pig she go to the classroom she want to sit beside her friend Susi. She look her classroom, it’s different from the classroom which is old. The new televisions the new desks and the new blackboard. What a nice classroom they have.

Train station

Peppa go to the train station to meet her grandpa and grandma. Her grandparents will arrive after 30 minutes so peppa buy a bunch of carnations. In the train station they can see a lot of people hurry to get a train. They look for their grandparents but they cant find them in anywhere. suddenly someone said “Hey Peppa and George I give you some toys” They returned their head and found their grandparents

Library

The library is very big there are many books in it. One day, when Peppa go to the library she saw two naughty students are talking loudly. Peppa think it not good talk highly in the library. She saiys may you not talk so loudly please. Student need study and reading in quiet place. So two kids are very embarrased. then each of them look for a book and go to a seat o read it.

People’s Square

When Peppa go to the people’s square, What amazing public place. There are crowds of people in it. Suddenly she sees a nice sculpture and there is a lot of flowers, she let the people who is passing the road to take a photo for her family and her. And then they go to shopping and then they go to the park. They fly a kite and have a picnic. what a wonderful day

The Bund

One nice day, Peppa go to the bund  What are they talking. Then she hears some sound which made from the big clock. She go to a restaurant and have a lunch then go on a boat.She take a lot of beautiful photos on the bund and then she buy a lot of beautiful things for her family. After sightseeing she goes home and she tells her brother george and her parents the bund is an amazing place.

Escalator

Two naughty kids are running fast on the escalator one. One slipped and fell down so he started to cry  peppa says don’t cry let me help you  then she gave some medicine on this kid wond . She said it was dangerous to run or jump on the escalator you cant do it or we will be hurt ourselves

Stadium

peppa’s family buys four tickets for their family. After a few days they go to the stadium and look carefully. Suddenly a ball go to the gate. Peppa is very excited. she said look father pig what a nice ball that they kicked at once. There are thousand seats in this stadium. The stadium is so big it is convenient for people to have a match

Museum

One day, Peppa go to the museum with George  There are many old things in it. There are different rooms in it too. First, they go to the natural room It is the best room for George because George like dinosaurs. then george touched the ancient dinosaur stones. Peppa tells him we cant touch it because it will be broken or damaged by us. After they never touched anything in the museum

Lift

Peppa and her family went to a department store. First they want to go to the highest floor, there are many restaurants on this floor. They go on the lift it is very large and bright. Peppa sees there is a sign only 13 people . George is very happy to go to the departmentstore with hsi family so he jumps high. then peppa tells him don’t jump, they lifts are run by computers, they are very convenient for us, and we can’t destroy its very dangerous to jump.

Highway 

Peppa’s family want to go to Beijing so they drive their red car and go onto the highway. There are few cars on the highway, so father pig drives fast. Peppa pig is very strange why his father drives so fast. Then the mother pig tells her highway is long and large we can drive on it more faster than on the overpass. It’s useful

Parking lot 

One day Peppa and her family go to the century park they look for a parking lot. Peppa and his brother george felt very strange. They ask their father why they don’t park their caron the street. Their parents tell them the parking in the parking lot is much better for cars than parking on the street. parking lots is more safe than park on the street.

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Store

Peppa pig went to the store. First she went to a clothing store. She bought herself a new dress and bought her mom a bunch of flowers. She also bought a toy dinosaur for her little brother George. Then she went to a bakery to get some pastries. It’s her grandpa’s birthday so she also bought a beautiful chocolate cake. Peppa pig loves to go shopping!

Swimming Pool

It’s summer vacation so Peppa goes to the swimming pool with her little brother George. There are a lot of people in the swimming pool. George can’t swim but he plays in the water with Peppa. Suddenly, Peppa swims away very quickly and George is very surprised. After finishing from the swimming pool, they felt much cooler in the hot summer.

KFC

One day Mother Pig went on a business trip so father pig, peppa, and george had to go to KFC to have dinner. Father pig wanted to eat 4 chicken wings  and a bottle of cola. Peppa and george wanted to eat a chicken burger and some french fries. It’s yummy but it isn’t good for our health so Peppa told father pig “you have to learn how to cook so we can keep healthy.”

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Oriental Pearl TV Tower

One day Peppa watched a show on the oriental pearl tv tower, and so they bought 4 tickets to go see it. There are many people beside the tower. Above their head they some sunshine on the highest pink circle ball.It’s shining  it’s so beautiful. Finally they see the show is nice and amazing.

Airport

In the vacation, Peppa’s family wants to go to the Beijing. They go to the airport. How big the airport is! There are some shops in it, looked his watch. He said it’s two hours to go the airport so they look for four seats. George and peppa play soome computer games. Mother big goes shopping for the kids she buys a bar of chocolate and the fat father pig take a rest on the seat

Classroom

Peppa has to go to school it’s the first day of go to the school. Students are happy because they can see their friends. Peppa pig she go to the classroom she want to sit beside her friend Susi. She look her classroom, it’s different from the classroom which is old. The new televisions the new desks and the new blackboard. What a nice classroom they have.

Train station

Peppa go to the train station to meet her grandpa and grandma. Her grandparents will arrive after 30 minutes so peppa buy a bunch of carnations. In the train station they can see a lot of people hurry to get a train. They look for their grandparents but they cant find them in anywhere. suddenly someone said “Hey Peppa and George I give you some toys” They returned their head and found their grandparents

Library

The library is very big there are many books in it. One day, when Peppa go to the library she saw two naughty students are talking loudly. Peppa think it not good talk highly in the library. She saiys may you not talk so loudly please. Student need study and reading in quiet place. So two kids are very embarrased. then each of them look for a book and go to a seat o read it.

People’s Square

When Peppa go to the people’s square, What amazing public place. There are crowds of people in it. Suddenly she sees a nice sculpture and there is a lot of flowers, she let the people who is passing the road to take a photo for her family and her. And then they go to shopping and then they go to the park. They fly a kite and have a picnic. what a wonderful day

The Bund

One nice day, Peppa go to the bund  What are they talking. Then she hears some sound which made from the big clock. She go to a restaurant and have a lunch then go on a boat.She take a lot of beautiful photos on the bund and then she buy a lot of beautiful things for her family. After sightseeing she goes home and she tells her brother george and her parents the bund is an amazing place.

Escalator

Two naughty kids are running fast on the escalator one. One slipped and fell down so he started to cry  peppa says don’t cry let me help you  then she gave some medicine on this kid wond . She said it was dangerous to run or jump on the escalator you cant do it or we will be hurt ourselves

Stadium

peppa’s family buys four tickets for their family. After a few days they go to the stadium and look carefully. Suddenly a ball go to the gate. Peppa is very excited. she said look father pig what a nice ball that they kicked at once. There are thousand seats in this stadium. The stadium is so big it is convenient for people to have a match

Museum

One day, Peppa go to the museum with George  There are many old things in it. There are different rooms in it too. First, they go to the natural room It is the best room for George because George like dinosaurs. then george touched the ancient dinosaur stones. Peppa tells him we cant touch it because it will be broken or damaged by us. After they never touched anything in the museum

Lift

Peppa and her family went to a department store. First they want to go to the highest floor, there are many restaurants on this floor. They go on the lift it is very large and bright. Peppa sees there is a sign only 13 people . George is very happy to go to the departmentstore with hsi family so he jumps high. then peppa tells him don’t jump, they lifts are run by computers, they are very convenient for us, and we can’t destroy its very dangerous to jump.

Highway 

Peppa’s family want to go to Beijing so they drive their red car and go onto the highway. There are few cars on the highway, so father pig drives fast. Peppa pig is very strange why his father drives so fast. Then the mother pig tells her highway is long and large we can drive on it more faster than on the overpass. It’s useful

Parking lot 

One day Peppa and her family go to the century park they look for a parking lot. Peppa and his brother george felt very strange. They ask their father why they don’t park their caron the street. Their parents tell them the parking in the parking lot is much better for cars than parking on the street. parking lots is more safe than park on the street.