VIP Class Notes (George) [W+S]

Review all your old notes and try and do some writing.

Vocabulary

Environmentally Friendly-Something that is good for the environment.

e.g. Tesla cars are electric, they are environmentally friendly.

Accelerate- jia kuai to go from slow to fast.

e.g. My car accelerates very quickly, so I’m afraid to drive it.

To go on a date- when you go out to spend time with someone you like

e.g. My husband and I go on a date every weekend. We either watch a movie or go shopping.

Taught- past tense of the verb teach

e.g. Yesterday, I taught two students for 1 hour each.

Original 

I watched a movie in IAPM. I have a habit of going to watch a movie in the weekend.  I like to eat noodle in my favorite restaurant nearby IAPM before I watch a movie. Shanghai homemade, which tastes homemade, very rich flavor, after that I like to went to Chaoning life store to shopping. Actually this weekend, this Saturday evening , I an my husband test drive car tesla. I felt quite fast,  It can do 200 in 3 seconds. It’s very fast.

Corrected

This past Saturday, I went to watch a movie in IAPM. I have a habit of going to watch movies on the weekend.  I like to eat noodles in my favorite restaurant nearby IAPM before I watch a movie. They are Shanghai style, which taste homemade, and have a very rich flavor. After that I went to Chaoning life store to do some shopping. Actually this weekend, this Saturday evening , my husband and I test drove a tesla. I felt that the car accelerates very quickly.  It can reach 200 km in 3 seconds. It’s very fast.

Original

This is Josh wrote a letter to his father 7 years ago,when he was in primary school,he could only saw his father in the weekend,so he wrote a lot of about his love and miss for his father in the letter. Dad: father’s day happy! when I felt alone and bored, you always companion me . if you were here by my side , I think I can never alone and bored. Dad: thank you! I wish you good health and forever young ! your son :Josh

Corrected

This is a letter Josh wrote to his father 7 years ago,when he was in primary school,he could only see his father on the weekend,so he wrote a lot about his love and how he misses his father in the letter. Dad: happy father’s day ! when I felt alone and bored, you were always there for me . if you were here by my side , I think I can never feel alone and bored. Dad: thank you! I wish you good health and hope you stay forever young ! your son: Josh

Original

Today is my last class in first semester at the SE,I most should be grateful that my teacher who have made learn English quite interesting for me! Jesse helps me understand to actively communicate is important.  After then I should be grateful for the accomplishment and enjoy the process at Smart English! I must say I am really enjoying learn here,until the next time we meet!

Corrected

Today is my last class at SE. Before this  semester, I hadn’t studied English for a very long time, and forgot almost everything. So I am most grateful that my teachers who taught me  English made it quite interesting for me! Jesse helped me understand that actively communicating is important. I should be grateful for the accomplishment and enjoy the process at Smart English! I must say I really enjoyed learning here. Until the next time we meet, thank you very much!