VIP Class Notes (George) [W]

Writing exercise

Original

Trump’s policy and China’s reasonable reaction (Part 2)

As almost everyone estimated, President Trump has made numerous decisions incompliant to American policies in the past several decades, especially after the cold war. The US has quitted several important organizations and protocols, economic or ecological. Besides that, President Trump even risked the dismiss of the NATO to threaten the alliances to increase the military budget share. He also put pressure to the leaders of North Korea, Iran and Turkey on nuclear weapon and human right issue. A trade war against China, increased tariffs on European partners and even Canada……It seems he is leading the US to fight against the whole world.

Although his behaviors look crazy, some results turned out that he won. The question is, will he continue winning in the rest topics as before? Or will his strategy fail at a certain time?

Corrected

Trump’s policy and China’s reasonable reaction (Part 2)

As almost everyone estimated, (As most people would agree), President Trump has made numerous decisions incompliant [that break with established traditions concerning] to American policies in the past several decades, especially after [following] the cold war. The US has quit several important organizations and protocols, both economic and ecological [environmental]. Besides that, President Trump even risked the dismiss [withdrawing from] the NATO and threatened American alliances [allies] to increase the [their contribution to the] military budget. He also put pressure to [on] the leaders of North Korea, Iran and Turkey on nuclear weapons and human rights issues. A trade war against China, increased tariffs on European partners and even Canada……It seems he is leading the US to fight against the whole world.

Although his behaviors [actions] look crazy, some results turned out that he won [were successful]. The question is, will he continue his winning [streak] in the rest topics as before ? Or will his strategy [eventually] fail at a certain time?

Vocabulary

Sweeping Statements- A statement that over-generalizes to an extent that might not be true or verifiable.

e.g. We must not make sweeping statements in formal writing as our opponents might accuse us of ignoring others opinions.

Streak- A long line or something that continues unbroken, can be figurative or literal.

e.g. A finger streak on the clean window OR I played a video game and had a winning streak for 10 games in a row.

Ultrasound- A level of sound that humans can’t hear.

e.g. When a woman is pregnant, she will have to go to the doctor’s for an ultrasound.