VIP Class Notes (George) [S + W]

Review the past few classes.

Vocabulary

Hood- the thing you wear on your head from a jacket or a sweater OR the thing in your kitchen that sucks in the air.

e.g. They are coming to install the new hood I bought for my stove.

Ventilation- a kind of system that moves air inside a room or building.

e.g. There is something wrong with the ventilation system, it’s very hot right now.

Appliances- electrical devices that you need for your home.

e.g. Fridge, washing machine, dryer, are all different kinds of appliances.

Movie reviews-  ying ping something you write about a movie, if you liked it or not.

e.g. I wrote a movie review for home work, it was reviewing the movie Get Out.

Justice- when a criminal does something bad, and then receives the consequences.

e.g. There was justice for that family who’s son was killed, because the police caught the killer.

Triumph- to win over something

e.g. Good will always triumph over evil.

Original

Yesterday and the day before yesterday i went to ji an. I went to there to decorate a showroom and it almost done but I added a lot of decorates they need to buy and they said they wanted an opening event so I think I will go there again. and then next week I will go to my hometown I’m so excited because I will hire someone to install the  devices that I bought online like the water heater, and the fan and maybe install the TV. I will move a lot of furniture from the old house to the new house. I think the first day I will work and then the next three days I will spend my weekend at home.  Next Thursday

Corrected

Yesterday and the day before yesterday i went to Ji An. I went there to decorate a showroom and it was almost done but I added a lot of small decorative items  they needed to buy and they said they wanted to host an opening event so I think I will go there again. Then next week I will go to my hometown I’m so excited because I will hire someone to install the appliances that I bought online like the water heater, and the fan and maybe help me to install the TV. I will move a lot of furniture from the old house to the new one. I think the first day I will work and then the next three days I will spend my weekend at home.

Original

These days I watched a horror movie named Get Out. One white girl invited her black photographer boyfriend to her hometown to see her parents. Before went there the boy was a little nervous because of her nation. The girl said her parents wouldn’t mind it and they went there. The girl’s parents looked very gentle and they treated him well. The boy noticed there were two black persons there, a young woman and a young man. They both looked wired, and the young woman dressed like a maid and the young man dressed like a militia. At night the boy couldn’t sleep then he went out to smoke. Through windows he saw the black woman touch her neck and seemed admire herself. While he got out his smoke the black man ran by him quickly like a missile. Then he went back to the room and met her girlfriend’s mother. She was a (alienist)and she was good at (hypnosis). Next morning the boy woke up by a nightmare, in the dream he plummeted into dark. Then he realized maybe his girlfriend’s mother (hypnotized) him, and he told his friend when he thought about smoking he felt disgusting, so her mother cured his smoking, and that’s not bad. But the next thing was horrible and more aggressive.

Corrected

These days I watched a horror movie named Get Out. One white girl invited her black photographer boyfriend to her hometown to meet her parents. Before going there the boy was a little nervous because of his race. The girl said her parents wouldn’t mind it and they went there. The girl’s parents looked very gentle and they treated him well. The boy noticed there were two black people there, a young woman and a young man. They both looked weird, and the young woman dressed like a maid and the young man dressed like a gardener. At night the boy couldn’t sleep so he went out to smoke. Through the window he saw the black woman touch her neck and seemed to admire herself. While he got out his cigarettes the black man ran by him quickly like a missile. Then he went back to the room and met his girlfriend’s mother. She is a psychiatrist and she was good at (hypnosis). Next morning the boy was woken up by a nightmare, in the dream he plummeted into the dark. Then he realized maybe his girlfriend’s mother (hypnotized) him, and he told his friend when he thought about smoking he felt disgusting, so her mother cured his smoking, and that’s not bad. But the next thing was horrible and more aggressive.