VIP Class Notes (George) [W]

Finish reviewing the domestic animals on page 23 and continue doing the grammar review.

Write a small story using the different family terms such as stepmother, niece, cousin, etc. 

Vocabulary

Traffic accident – when two cars hit each other or collide.

e.g. When I went to Wuxi , I saw many traffic accidents happen because of the heavy fog.

Collide- When two things hit very hard.

e.g. The car collided against the wall and was completely destroyed.

Fender bender- when two cars touch each other or hit each other lightly.

e.g. I had a fender bender last year and the other driver asked me to pay 5000 rmb. I told him no.

Grammar

They are both the same age

Years old

Original

Last Friday, we went ot Wuxi factory to work from 7am until 5 pm. The weather didn’t help rain by day cold at night we arrived at suxhou hotel at dusk. We were totally exhausted I’m not in the habit of eating in the late evening i needed have a shower and sleep but i sleep at dawn because I sleep during the day if I am in Suzhou .

Corrected

Last Friday, we went to a factory in Wuxi to work from 7am until 5 pm. We walked around the factory, from one building to another. We drove on the highway to get to Wuxi but we spent around 4 hours to get there. There was a lot of smog so we had to drive slowly because we couldn’t see very clearly. The weather didn’t help either, during the day, it was raining, and at night, it was pretty cold. We arrived at Suzhou hotel at dusk. We were totally exhausted. I’m not in the habit of eating in the late evening so I just took a shower and went to sleep but i usually sleep at dawn because I sleep during the day if I am in Suzhou.