VIP Class Notes (George) [S+W]

Write about your CNY experience. 

Original

I dunno what’s the plan for CNY from others, I really wonder, Chinese new year is just family gathering together eat and drinks and talks i don’t call it a thing, I just call it a normal life, and its boring to me and always the same topics like, especially from the senior relatives, like whens’ your plan for your next child, and how much money did you earn this,, liaoning province, after the new year eve, I spent my new year eve in shanghai, then go to my hometown the next day. It’s really costy for Chinese new year. and you just go back to your hometown for a few days.

Corrected

I dunno what others have planned for CNY  but I really think Chinese new year is just family gathering when people get together to eat and drink and talk i don’t call it a thing, I just call it normal life, and its boring for me and its always the same topics, especially from senior relatives, like when’s are you planning to have your next child, and how much money did you earn this year. liaoning province, after new year’s eve, I will spend my new year’s eve in shanghai, and then go to my hometown the next day. It’s really costly during Chinese new year. and you just go back to your hometown for a few days.

Vocabulary

Social Security system- the internal government system that deals with personal information and taxes.

e.g. In Canada every person has a social security number that they need in order to get a job and use the hospital.

Original

What was the biggest scandal in 2018?

Famous Singer Yufan Chen was caught for drug usage on Dec. It was such a breaking news that Weibo server temporally crushed.
Yufan Chen is from a very famous singer group YU Quan, which is a legend in Chinese music history. They brought Popular Music to majority of Chinese people in latest 20 years. Before that, Popular Music was only enjoyed by certain group of people. They broke CD sales record in their second CD. Their song was broadcast everywhere.
They also contributed a lot in charity & social responsibility, which includes ads against drug usage. It becomes the biggest sarcasm now, & be discussed by everyone

Corrected

What was the biggest scandal in 2018?

Famous Singer Yufan Chen was caught using drugs in December. It was such a breaking piece of news that Weibo’s server temporally crashed.
Yufan Chen is from a very famous singer group called YU Quan, which is a legend in Chinese music history. They brought Popular Music to a majority of Chinese people in latest 20 years. Before that, Popular Music was only enjoyed by certain groups of people. They broke CD sale records in their second CD. Their song were broadcast everywhere.
They also contributed a lot in charity & social responsibility, which includes ads against drug usage. It became the biggest scandal & is being discussed by everyone.