VIP Class Notes (George) [S+W]

Write how you want to protect the environment

talk a bit more about using “be” in different sentences

Vocabulary

A pair- when there is two of something the same.

e.g. a pair of chopsticks, a pair of socks, a pair of pants,  pair of shoes

Environment-  huan jing the earth and everything in it that lets us live.

e.g. We hope to live in a clean environment so we don’t have to worry about getting sick.

e.g. Some parts of China have very polluted environments.

Protect- baohu to keep something safe

e.g. How will you protect the environment?

Pollution- wu ran something that makes something else bad for your health

e.g. We should try to not use plastic because it makes a lot of pollution

Be- is Be happy/ I want you to be strong/ I will be in the office from 9 am to 6 pm.

Pronunciation

Cold- kou-old

Original

last weekend, It was snowing in Shanghai!Winter is here at last. I went out to look the snow view. Seeing snow at that moment was a exciting.I remember this year it also snowed in January, Shanghai has been snowed twice this year.when snow will stop, the weather will getting colder.

Corrected

last weekend, it was snowing in Shanghai!Winter is here at last. I went out to look at the snow falling. The moment I saw it, I felt very excited OR it was a very exciting moment.I remember it also snowed in January, Shanghai has seen snow twice this year.when it stops snowing the weather will become colder.

Corrected

Last Saturday was my husband’s birthday. We went to IAPM  to celebrate his birthday and we bought a jacket and a pair of shoes.Then, after that we ate noodles for dinner. In China, when you celebrate your birthday, you should eat noodles because noodles are long so people think it can help make your life longer. When we finished eating, we walked around IAPM because it was very cold outside so we found a coffee shop and stayed there drinking coffee and milk tea and eating pancakes. Last Sunday, we slept in because the day before we went to bed very late. That weekend my son was living with his grandmother  so my husband drove and brought him back home at noon. Then, Sunday afternoon we watched TV and ordered take-out for dinner. I think that it’s very comfortable to be inside during cold weather.

Original

Last saturday was my husband birthday. We went to IAPM store to celebrate his birthday and buy jack and skeche shoes. And then, after that we ate noodle for dinner. In China, your birthday days you should eat noodles to celebrate . and then we walk around IAPM mall because outside is very coulduh weather so we stayed in coffee shop and ate pancakes. Last sunday we sleep late because yesterday we went to bed late so sunday morning we sleep late. My son lived his grandmother home so my husband drive to take him home at noon, then sunday afternoon we watched tv, we ordered take out for dinner. I think that it’s very comfortable to be inside during cold weather.