VIP Class Notes (George) [S]

Write about pasta. What is your favorite type of pasta? Why? Do you like red sauce or white sauce?

(from Nick’s class that she didn’t do)

Vocabulary

Shovel- a thing that you use to dig dirt with.

e.g. She used a shovel to dig a hole in the ground.

Pot- a container we put plants or flowers in.

e.g. My mom has many pots filled with flowers on our balcony.

Interview- when you ask someone questions and they have to answer.

e.g. I will have an interview for my English competition next month.

Grammar

the girl go to school, and then he went home- the girl went to school and then she went home.

Original

On Friday afternoon, our math teacher gave us a public lesson to all the math teachers in our school. Although we go home late and I go to play the clarinet on time. At 5 o’clock I had my dinner, I also went to have a math lesson until 8 o’clock. I took the subway to my home and I do some homework and go to bed. On Saturday at 8, I eat noodles and to swimming in the pool. Then, I did some homework and had some lunch. then, after I had some little rest and play some games. I got up early and had a hot dog and went to have a chinese lesson by at one oclock i got to playthe clarinet and after I play the clarinet I go here have lesson with nick. At 4:30 I go to christmas town in jing an kerry center in jing ann kerry center we bought some delicious food and had some beautiful photos

Corrected

On Friday afternoon, our math teacher gave a public lesson to all the math teachers in our school. Although we went home late, I still managed to get to clarinet class on time. At 5 o’clock I had my dinner, I also went to have a math lesson until 8. I took the subway home and I did some homework and went to bed. On Saturday at 8, I ate noodles and went swimming in the pool. Then, I did some homework and had some lunch.  after I had some rest and played some games. I got up early and had a hot dog and went to have a chinese lesson at one. i got to play the clarinet and after I came here to have lessons with Nick. At 4:30 I went to the Christmas town in jing an kerry center and we bought some delicious food and took some beautiful photos