VIP Class Notes (George) [S]

Write about the nicest thing you saw in Japan

Vocabulary

Exchange- When we give something to get something else.

e.g. HelloTalk is a language exchange app, you teach someone your language and they teach you theirs.

Beach- the part with sand that’s near the ocean

Hot springs- like a pool or bath we go in to clean ourselves and relax.

e.g. Japan is famous for it’s hot springs, everyone loves them

Coral- Kind of looks like a white tree branch, but in the ocean

e.g. When I went swimming in Okinawa, I saw many different kinds of coral,

Vietnam- (yuenan) A country near China

Original

In Japan I went to the beach with my mother and friends. Japanese ocean is very beautiful. It’s don’t like Chinese ocean. So we take a boat on ocean with many fish and shanghu and then we went in a building underwater. And then, we went same show. Then we went to the city center for dinner. We eaten japanese food and then we back to the island. And then we back to cruise to shanghai.

Corrected

In Japan I went to the beach with my mother and friend. Japan’s ocean is very beautiful. It’s not like Chinese oceans. So we take a boat on the ocean with many fish swimming around the coral and then we went in a building underwater. And then, we went to go see a show/performance at Liuqiucun. Then we went to the city center for dinner. We ate japanese food and then we went back to the island. And then we continued to take the cruise back to shanghai