VIP Class Notes (George) [W]

Describe your trip to Shandong, what you did and what you saw.

Vocabulary

Attractions- Something that attracts you to a place.

e.g. The Great Wall is one of China’s main cultural attractions.

Original 

As a social person, we need to be educated, and China introduced compulsory education since 1986. If we accept education, we should learn something from school, and reading is one of the main ways to get knowledge. When we graduated to work After we graduate and go to work, we also need to read something to do some work, especially when we do paperwork. Reading ability also relates to our understanding ability to understand. If we couldn’t can’t read, I think we couldn’t wouldn’t be able to understand. As reading plays a very important role in our life and studies, how to develop it is also very important. According to my learning experience, I think learning anything is a course  that goes from easy to hard. Developing your reading ability is also like this. Take my process of learning English as an example. At first, I just read some books for kids, when I found it was very easy, I got to read books for pupils, when I noticed it was easy for me, I got to read books for middle school and high school students. So I think a good way to develop your reading ability is learning something from easy to hard, improve it step by step.

Corrected

As a social person, we need to be educated, and China introduced compulsory education since 1986. If we accept education, we should learn something from school, and reading is one of the main ways to get knowledge. After we graduate and go to work, we also need to read something to do some work, especially when we do paperwork. Reading ability also relates to our understanding ability to understand. If we couldn’t can’t read, I think we wouldn’t be able to understand. As reading plays a very important role in our life and studies, how to develop it is also very important. According to my learning experience, I think learning anything is a course  that goes from easy to hard. Developing your reading ability is also like this. Take my process of learning English as an example. At first, I just read some books for kids, when I found it was very easy, I got to read books for pupils, when I noticed it was easy for me, I got to read books for middle school and high school students. So I think a good way to develop your reading ability is learning something from easy to hard, improve it step by step.