VIP Class Notes (George)

Today we focused on:

Writing

my goal is every day is funny a happy and be a nice student.
because sometimes my mom will be angry when i am doing my homework, i am doing too slow or i do it not good, so i want every day happy and be a nice student, i want to be a nice student because then, i can do my homework faster and have higher accuracy then my mom will be happy.
in our class, there is a sentence: study makes my mom happy, my mom happy, my family happy.
at future, i want to go to MIT because i want to study IT and AI. then, i want to make games to give other people happy day, i want to be the chief designer of asphalt 20 because i really like this type of game.

revised: 

my goal is to make every day funny and happy day and be a nice student.
because sometimes my mom will be angry if i am doing my homework too slow or not good, so i want to be happy every day and be a nice student, i want to be a nice student because then, i can do my homework faster and have higher accuracy then my mom will be happy.
in our class, there is a sentence: study makes my mom happy, my mom happy, my family happy.
in the future, i want to go to MIT because i want to study IT and AI. then, i want to make games to give other people happy days/ happiness, i want to be the chief designer of asphalt 20 because i really like this type of game.