VIP Class Notes (George)

write about the yellow book of minecraft explaining shortly the idea about each chapter

my favourite movie is titanic and it’s a drama film. in this movie , there are two important people: Jack and Rose. at first, the ship hit on the big ice, the ship will fall into the sea, ladies will take the boat to be save first. but Rose didn’t want to leave Jack and jump in the ship. and went to find Jack. the ship was falling in to the sea, Jack and Rose ran to highest place and they got safe.
at last, Jack and Rose both fell in to the sea. but jack was dead and Rose was very very sad, she was very tired and she can’t shout very loud. but no one came to save them.

revised:

my favorite movie is titanic and it’s a drama film. in this movie , there are two important people/characters: Jack and Rose. at first, the ship hit on an iceberg, the ship will sink into the sea, ladies will take the boat to be safe first. but Rose didn’t want to leave Jack and jumped in to the ship. and went to find Jack. the ship was sinking in the sea, Jack and Rose ran to the tip of the ship and they got safe.
at last, Jack and Rose both fell in to the sea. but jack was dead and Rose was very sad, she was very tired and she can’t shout very loud. but no one came to save them.

i fished my homework a long time , then when i finished my homework lunch was ready

it took me a long time to finish my homework, by the time i finished homework, lunch was ready

Vocabulary

iceberg: 冰山
a large piece of ice floating on the sea

sink: (v) （使）沉没
going below the surface or to the bottom of the sea

tip: 尖端
the end of one side of something