VIP Class Notes (George)

Homework

write about tigers with more details and information

Today we focused on:

we watched National Geographic videos about pigs

Writing

I went to restaurant by car, it was rain. we had some meat, a few of pork and many rice. I was very big, the waiter is tall and he wear write shirt, thies thigs were very nice.
the hell was very big, the light is yellow. there was a small tree, it had many leaves. the table is very big. the food were very good. but the restaurant is very ugly.

revised:

I went to the restaurant by car, it was raining. we had some meat, a few of pork and a lot of rice. It was a very big restaurant, the waiter was tall and he was wearing a white shirt.
the room was very big, the light was yellow. there was a small tree, it had many leaves. the table was very big. the food was very good. but the restaurant was very ugly.

Speaking

the pigs, they are smart and small but the forest pig black and big, long time ago he is very big, his nose bigger than the forest pig, ear bigger too, he is very long and fat, he runs very fast. now farmers pig is pink and small, long time ago the pig eats meat, now they eat the grass and they are not very dirty. we eat pigs are farmer pig.

revised:

the pigs are smart and small but the forest pig is black and big, long time ago it was very big, his nose is bigger than the farm pig, bigger ears too, it is very long and fat but runs very fast. now farm pig is pink and small, long time ago the pig was eating meat, now they eat the grass and they are not very dirty. we eat farm pigs.