VIP Class Notes (George) [S]

Write about the work that you did in Paris.

Review the new words.

Vocabulary

Alter- change something either clothes or DNA or other things.

e.g. If you want to alter any clothing, you have to go to the tailor.

Ethics-  if something is good behavior or not.

e.g.  If you care about your coffee being ethical, don’t buy nescafe.

Psychologist- xinlixuejia

e.g. If you are always feeling sad or you mind feels too nervous, you should see a psychologist.

Fee- an amount you have to pay for something.

e.g. If your luggage is too heavy, you have to pay a fee for the rest.

Unattended- not paying attention to something or someone, to leave it by itself.

e.g. You should never let children play in a pool unattended.

Drown- when you died in the water because you can’t breathe.

e.g. I don’t know how to swim very well, and I’m afraid of drowning so I don’t go to the pool.

Original 

I just went back to Paris to celebrate Christmas with some friends and my uncle and aunty who are in Paris. Then from the 5th february I went Belin  for one week. I worked there for 2 days and stayed for 5 more days, and stayed with another auntie who lives in Belin.  Actually I have been once in berlin 5 years ago and I travelled as a tourist and visited some sign spots but this time I got to know some local person who I worked with the first two days. They just brought me to some interesting place not just for tourist. I went to some vintage shops it was very famous in berlin also some exhibition and some rooftop bars and some famous club. I heard that Belin is famous for is clubs but in my opinion German is always very serious but when people said clubs in belin were very craz i cant understand but this time I went to a club which is famous there and I experienced there. Now I know why people said the clubs there.

Corrected

I just went back to Paris to celebrate Christmas with some friends and my uncle and aunty who are in Paris. Then on the 5th of february I went Berlin  for one week. I worked there for 2 days and stayed for 5 more days, and stayed with another auntie who lives in Berlin.  Actually I have been to berlin once 5 years ago and I traveled as a tourist and visited some scenic spots but this time I got to know some local people who I worked with the first two days. They just brought me to some interesting places not just for tourists. I went to some vintage shops which were very famous in berlin also some exhibitions and some rooftop bars and some famous clubs. I heard that Berlin is famous for its clubs but in my opinion Germans are always very serious but when people said clubs in berlin were very crazy i couldn’t understand  why but this time I went to a club which is famous there and I experienced it. Now I know why people said the clubs there are crazy.