VIP Class Notes (George) [S]

Start on TPO8 TASK 4, PREPARE WRITING FOR NEXT WEEK FROM LAST TIME

Vocabulary

Mockery- 

The apple doesn’t fall far from the tree-

Like father, like son

TPo7 Task 6

Original

the two major factors are reliability and feature.s Reliability is how reliable a product is in other words the absence of defect or we can say, the product can work for a long time without problem. Another major factor is product is features features refers to the details of the products, the windows the seats or other details of a car. Before people take reliability as the most important factor of a product but now since the reliability of a product are all very good people began to pay more attention to features now, when  two products are the same reliable, what are the difference, features will be the customer think more about

Corrected

the two major factors are reliability and features Reliability is how reliable a product is, in other words the absence of defect or we can say, the product can work for a long time without problem. Another major factor of product is features. Features refers to the details of the product, the windows ,the seats or other details of a car. Before people took reliability as the most important factor of a product but now since the reliability is all fairly similar, people have begun to pay more attention to features now. When two products reliability is the same/is equal OR when two products are equally reliable, what makes the difference to the customer?   Features will be the key factor that customers think more about.

TPo8 Task 1

Original

When I was ten years old, my friend Yang went to the zoo with me on the weekend. We had quite happy time there and spent almost every cent in our pocket. When we noticed that, we suddenly noticed we didn’t have enough money to buy a bus ticket back home, it was a long road. Maybe 8-10 km. Two kids walked under sun for several hours we got very hungry. we passed a restaurant the hungry two kids looked into the restaurant, Yang touched his pocket and pulled out one yuan the last money we had he bought a small

we all had a small piece of the bite.

it could not save us from the hunger

to his friends or family member.

Corrected

When I was ten years old, my friend Yang went to the zoo with me on the weekend. We had quite a happy time there and spent almost every cent in our pocket. When we noticed that, we suddenly noticed we didn’t have enough money to buy a bus ticket back home, it was a long road. Maybe 8-10 km. Two kids walked under the big sun for several hours we got very hungry. we passed a restaurant the hungry two kids looked into the restaurant, Yang touched his pocket and pulled out one yuan the last money we had he bought a small

he split the pancake into two pieces

we both had a small bite of it

it could not save us from being hungry

to his friends or family members.

TPo8 Task 2

Original

because safety and healthy is the most

if we take risk of ourselves and something unfortunate happens to us.

Corrected

because safety and health are the most

if we take risk of ourselves and something unfortunate happens to us.

If we put ourselves IN risky situations

if we put ourselves AT risk 

if we risk ourselves

TPO8 Task 3

Original 

Prededators x 2

(miss the peanut bug)

brightly enough to reflect sunlight

Corrected

Preh-deh-ters PREDATOR

(missed the peanut bug)

bright enough to reflect sunlight