VIP Class Notes (David) [W]

1. What do you like to do in your free time? Give details.
2. What would you do if you never had to work or worry about money? Why?

Grammar

My company has work for kiosk for mcdonalds. -> My company makes kiosks for restaurants.

I have been work about almost one year -> I have been working about/almost one year.

I am a manager assistant in the company. I am a manager’s assistant in the company.

I always make restaurant reservations.

I always learn English in my job. -> I’m always studying English at work.

My boss and my workmate are Shanghainese, too. My boss and my coworkers/colleagues are Shanghainese, too.

I have graduated from university in 2014. I graduated from university in 2014.

My whole job is not use to speak in English. I don’t use English at work/at my job.

I think children is so simple and we can have a conversation and it’s more comfortable than adults.

Durham University (durr-em)

My favourite teacher is the head teacher of senior high school who is a nice and patient women. When I was a student, I wasn’t good at talking with classmates. She gave me a chance to as a commissary in charge of publicity and introduced me to a teacher who is the manager of school radio station. So I need to read many messages of different departments everyday. And I had been school radio director for 1 year which made me improve my confidence. Now I have been learning English for IEITS. I would like to study English Language Education in Britain. If I become a teacher in the future, I guess I will get along with my students very well. I think it must be a good memory in my life.

Corrected:

My favourite teacher is the head teacher of my high school. She is my favourite because she is a nice and patient woman. When I was a student, I wasn’t good at talking with classmates. She gave me a chance to be the commissary in charge of publicity in my classroom. Additionally, she introduced me to the teacher who was the manager of the school radio station. As my classroom’s commissary, I needed to read many messages from different departments everyday. I was also the school’s radio director for 1 year which made me improve my confidence.

Now I have been learning English for IELTS. I would like to study English Language Education in Britain. If I become a teacher in the future, I know I will do my best to get along with my students very well. I think it will be a memorable experience for me.

Vocabulary

Readability – how easy it is for the reader to understand what you wrote, or to read what you wrote.

Confuse – to not understand something or a situation

Influence – when someone is changed by another person or thing

Humble – to not have a big ego

Boastful – to brag about yourself

motivated – to really want to do something

obvious – very easily recognizable