Profile Update Notes (Jesse) [W]

Writing exercise

My last weekend
Last Friday I had a very busy day. At 11:00am I went to my friend´s house because that day we had lunch, we were 11 girls and the priest, and we had lunch after the priest finished the mass. The lunch was delicious, which was many dishes like Salmon with sauce of wine and mustard, pasta, broccoli salad, rice, sweet salad (with raisin, walnuts, apple, mango, lettuce etc), then we ate dessert which was lemon jelly, chocolate cake with strawberries and empanadas with caramel, that caramel was to made with condensed milk, really a delicious meal. After that, I went back home. and at 4pm I went to my friend´s house because I had appointment for massage in my legs, at 5:30pm I went back home again. I needed a few relax, although it was half hour, because at 7.30 I should leave again, I went with my friends to the Cuban restaurant (La bodeguita del Medio), that night we were had dinner while ate listened latin music, when we finished to eating we were drinking liquor and dance until 12:30am.
Last Saturday was a relaxed day, because really I didn’t do anything. I woke up too late, at 11:30, and then I took a shower. That day my husband made lunch which was chicken meat balls, at 6:00pm my husband went to gym and me too, but beforehand we slept a little more. When we back home, we prepared dinner and ate, then we sat on the sofa with a blanket and we saw a movie which was Coco, by the way the movie was very sad, but let a good lesson like love for the family.
Last Sunday we went to Swedish restaurant to had a brunch, all food delicious. We were full so we back home walking, we walked around 2 kilometres. At home we fell asleep 20 minutes, and then I started drawing and painting the new painting for my aunt. After that I started my English homework, and stopped it a few minutes during I prepared dinner, and then I continued and finished it.

My last weekend
Last Friday I had a very busy day. At 11:00am I went to my friend´s house because that day we had lunch, we were 11 girls and the priest, and we had lunch after the priest finished the mass. The lunch was delicious, and included many dishes like Salmon with sauce of wine and mustard, pasta, broccoli salad, rice, sweet salad (with raisin, walnuts, apple, mango, lettuce etc), then we ate dessert which was lemon jelly, chocolate cake with strawberries and empanadas with caramel, that caramel was made with condensed milk…. it was really a delicious meal. After that, I went back home. and at 4pm I went to my friend´s house because I had appointment for a leg massage, and at 5:30pm I went back home again. I needed a few minutes to relax, although it was half hour, because at 7.30 I needed to leave again, I went with my friends to the Cuban restaurant (La bodeguita del Medio). That night we were having dinner and while eating we listened to latin music. When we finished eating we were drinking liquor and dancing until 12:30am.

Grammar

to have my legs massaged 

finish doing sth / finished doing sth

while we were doing sth we did sth / while we were doing sth we were doing sth

I made it with condensed milk < > it was made with condensed milk

there were 12 of us including 11 girls and the priest

which = “and it”, if you can use and just use and, don’t use which.

Vocabulary

including – bao kuo
eg. I have many friends including Elena

mature
eg. children are not very mature but adults should be
eg2. the banana matures after 4 weeks


listening 2.5
speaking 2.0
reading 2.25
writing 2.5