Profile Update Class (Tony)

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Previous Level

Listening: 3.5
Speaking: 2.5
Reading: 2.75
Writing: 2.25

Course suggestion change: Exercise Based Class.

Old writing / speaking correction

This morning I met an old friend, she told me, she had a fight with her husband and she was felling down. I asked, what’s your problem? kids? She said, just tired, do you feel tired to your husband? Do you have words to your husband? I said,when we stay at home and don’t do anything, we both laying down on the bed lazy. I put my computer between us and turn on my favorite drama. We watch our own mobile and we both keep quiet. My friend nod and said, we too.
It’s normal states among youth couple. Maybe you think married is peace, but the electronics was destroying our marriage. The mobile was replacing your husband, your wife, your career, until your life.

This morning I met an old friend, she told me, she had a fight with her husband and she was feeling down. I asked, what’s your problem? kids? She said, just tired, do you feel tired of your husband? Do you have something to say to your husband? I said, when we stay at home and don’t do anything, we are both lazy and lay around. I put my computer between us and turn on my favorite show. We watch our own phones and we both keep quiet. My friend nodded and said, us too.
It’s normal among young couples. Maybe you think marriage is peace and happiness, but the electronics are destroying our marriage. The phones are replacing your husband, your wife, your career, and eventually your life.

Comments / Other notes:

she left on bad terms (Her relationship with them was not good at that time)

not on speaking terms (not speaking to that person)

Grammar

Passive Voice (It just happened, we don’t know exactly who or what did it)

Example: I broke your phone.

Passive Example: Your phone got broken.

some clients are lost which were in charge of by her – some of her clients were lost. / she lost some of her clients.

Study Passive Voice Sentences

https://www.learnenglish.de/grammar/voicepassive.html