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Listening: 3.25
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Reading: 2
Writing: 3

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Last weekend I took my son to Changzhou Dinosaur water park. We lived in a dinosaur themed hotel and there are many kinds of room types in the hotel, we selected a cave room which has a rock wall and look like a cave. In the hotel, many lifelike dinosaur models are there. They can move and roar.
At Saturday, we went to the water park. When Nemo was a little baby, my husband took him to a baby swimming spa, he put Nemo in a small swimming pool and did not pacify him. Nemo was scared at that time, so he does not like swimming.
But after a long time, he began to enjoy playing with water, he told me he can swim now, of cause in his lifebuoy.

Last weekend I took my son to Changzhou Dinosaur water park. We stayed in a dinosaur themed hotel which has many styles of rooms, and we selected a cave room which has a rock wall and looks like a cave. In the hotel, many lifelike dinosaur models are there which can move and roar.
On Saturday, we went to the water park. When Nemo was a little baby, my husband took him to a baby swimming spa, and he put Nemo in a small swimming pool and did not comfort him. Nemo was scared at that time, so he does not like swimming.
But after a long time, he began to enjoy playing with water, and he told me he can swim now, but of course in his lifebuoy / floatie

 

Comments / Other notes:

Sentence construction: https://www.learnenglish.de/grammar/sentencetext.html

There is/are/was/will be

Prepositions of Time, and Place


use it in the right way

in what way do you mean?