Profile Update Class (Tony)

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Next update October 2018

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Listening: 3.25
Speaking: 3.0
Reading: 2.25
Writing: 3.2

Old writing / speaking correction

Original

Currently I think the Chinese government doesn’t tell people that  it doesn’t allow people to do something that government thinks is illegal. I think mostly looks fair, but something I don’t know is unfair. The government says the president is voted for by everyone all over the country but I don’t think so.

(CPC development)
Someway it works such as developing sports, infrastructure, economy, army (military), and space travel. It depends (for taxes), if one system is good. If one tax or taxes is too enough, then it depends.

Edited

Currently I think the Chinese government doesn’t tell people that it doesn’t allow people to do something that government thinks is illegal. I think mostly looks fair, but something I don’t know is might/could be unfair. The government says the president is voted for by everyone all over  the country but I don’t think so.

(CPC development)
Someway it works such as developing sports, infrastructure, economy, army (military), and space travel. It depends (for taxes), if one system is good, one tax or taxes is too enough much.

New Speaking Practice:

I will go to Taiwan this Saturday with my family. It is a second time for me to visit Taiwan but it is the first time for my wife and my daughter to Taiwan. I just booked the flight tickets, of routine from Shanghai to Taiwan. but I haven’t booked any hotel yet. The detail of the visit I haven’t finished. But I think we will visit Gao Xiong. A city in the south of Taiwan. And TaiPei is final city we will visit. I think we will go to Ali mountain and Ri Yue Tan, these two views are famous in China. There are a few different human races in Ali mountain. It has beautiful view in Ri Yue Tan.

I will go to Taiwan this Saturday with my family. It’s the second time for me to visit Taiwan but it’s the first time for my wife and my daughter to Taiwan. I just booked the flight round trip (plane) tickets, from Shanghai to Taiwan. But I haven’t booked any hotels yet. I haven’t finished (planning) my itinerary yet. But I think we’re gonna go to Gao Xiong. A city in the south of Taiwan. And TaiPei is the final city we will visit. I think we will go to Ali mountain and Ri Yue Tan, these two views are breathtaking. There are a few different ethnic groups in Ali mountain.

Comments / Other notes:

my flight is at 8.

my flight was delayed/canceled

I lost my plane tickets.

itinerary – all the details about your trip, Times, places, activities, tickets.

eg: I planned my whole itinerary, but then got sick so I had to cancel the trip.

round trip – when you buy plane tickets from one place to another place, an then back to the original place

eg: I bought round trip tickets from Phoenix to LA. I’ll be back in Phoenix next week.

one way – a plane ticket from one city, to another

eg: The explorers will have a one way ticket to Mars. They can’t come back.

eg: I just bought a one way ticket, I still need to buy my return ticket.

popped – blew up or broken, especially something filled with air or liquid

eg: The balloon popped and I cried.

eg: I popped my tire, I need to patch it so I can inflate it.

eg: No, thankfully the tire didn’t explode, that would’ve been dangerous, it just popped and the air came out.

eg: The housing crisis in America happened when the bubble popped. People simply made too many bad investments in real estate.