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Listening: 2.6
Speaking: 2.25
Reading: 1.75
Writing: 3.2

Speaking focus: Ask more questions in class.
Writing focus: Don’t forget Articles: A, An, THE.     +s.  he works,   five cats

Old writing / speaking correction

On the Japanese TV show a grandpa record two video to his young self. He record the first video to 18 year old self. He told 18 year old himself that he like DongJing University very much, but he will failed after three years. And he told the young man, don’t give up. and he told three year old himself that his life is very funny. He record the third video to 22 year old himself. He told 22 year old himself that he will love a girl vry much, but he was scared, he told himself. He should tell the beautiful girl that he loved her, and he want to get married with her. And he told the fact that the girl will be dead after three years and he never get married.

On a Japanese TV show a grandpa recorded two videos to his young self. He recorded the first one to his 18 year old self. He told his 18 year old self that he likes DongJing University very much, but he will fail after three years. And he told the young man, don’t give up and his life is very interesting. He recorded the second one to his 22 year old self. He told him that he will love a girl very much, but he will be scared. He told himself that he should tell the beautiful girl that he loves her, and wants to get married with her. He told the young man not to hesitate. And he told him the fact that the girl will be dead after three years and he never got married.

Comments / Other notes:

Listening:

Original:

Once when I was 16 years old I spent all my money on candy and had a really upset stomach. I went to the Doctor but he told me to just wait it out and that taking medicine would just make me feel worse. Haha I guess I learned my lesson and won’t eat so much candy next time.

You Repeat:

When I was 13 years old I bought candies. I spent all my money to buy candies. Then I had (What?) stomach , then I come to see the doctor, the doctor give me the medicine pills, then I get worse. I had many candies, haha, I can had many candies.

Why didn’t you work overtime recently?

Because I had a student to help me with my work. So I almost didn’t worked overtime recently. But I really had much work than before. I had many hospital beds than before. And I need to in charge cardio pulmonary exercise test. It’s a new department, and I had to prepare more case discussion or case report for my chief. And I need to go the outpatient department. And I have to try my best to write paper in this 2 monthes.

I didn’t work overtime recently because I had an intern to help me with my work. So I almost didn’t work overtime recently. But I really had much more work than before. I had many more hospital beds than before. And I need to be in charge of the cardio pulmonary exercise test. It’s a new department, and I had to prepare more case discussions and case reports for my chief. And I need to go the outpatient department. And I have to try my best to write my paper in the next 2 months.

Pronunciation

Genes – JeeN ‘s

Ancestors – Ann Ses Terrs

linked – Leen K’d