Profile Update Class (Jesse) [W]

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Listening: 3.5
Speaking: 2.75
Pronunciation: 2.25
Writing: 3.0

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In the ChingMing festival, I spent a nice traveling time with my boyfriend in GZ. That was our first traveling , both of us excited of it before the festival. During these days, the weather was very hot and like summer in GZ. When I flighted from SH to GZ, I worn a lot of clothes, but when I arrived GZ, I found that the weather so hot and I had to take off these clothes just left a T-shit. In GZ, my boyfriend took me outside to see the city’s different views. The first night, we were taking a boat to visit the zhujing river which is a long famous river across the whole GZ and connect the south sea. The coastal buildings with the shine light looks very beautiful. Especially Canton Tower. Under the night sky the canton tower changes different light colors and shows its charming. It has another name ” XiaoManYao” means the tower’s shape like a woman’s waist. The second day, we went to the ShaMian which is a colonial area just like Shanghai Xuhui. A lot of western buildings in there. But I felt very strange about these western buildings that most of them are empty. In SH, the government control the old buildings and let them were commercialized. The GZ government let these old buildings empty whether means source waste? At the last day, we are just went to shopping mall and watched a movie . I have to say , in GZ, there are indeed have a lot of delicious food. My boyfriend is good at choose the restaurant, he gave me a lovely memory of delicious food traveling in GZ. Every day , at the lunch and dinner time,I always to say that:” wa~~ Bady, this is so yummy , and I will became a fat girl if you continue to let me eat great food.” Then he watched me smiling said ” yes , that’s my wish.” That’s so lovely.

In the ChingMing festival, I spent a nice time, traveling with my boyfriend in GZ. That was our first trip, and both of us were excited about it before the festival. During these days, the weather was very hot and like summer in GZ. When I flew from SH to GZ, I wore a lot of clothes, but when I arrived in GZ, I found that the weather was so hot and I had to take off these clothes and / so I just was left with a T-shirt. In GZ, my boyfriend took me out to see the city’s different views. The first night, we took a boat to visit / see the zhujing river which is a long famous river across the whole of GZ and connects the south sea. The coastal buildings with the shiny light looks very beautiful, especially Canton Tower. Under the night sky the canton tower changes colors and shows its charm. It has another name ” XiaoManYao” which means the tower’s shape is like a woman’s waist. The second day, we went to the ShaMian which is a colonial area just like Shanghai‘s Xuhui. There are a lot of western buildings there. But I felt very strange about these western buildings and most of them are empty / of which most are empty. In SH, the government controls the old buildings and lets them become / be commercialized. The GZ government makes these old buildings become empty and I wonder / I was thinking about whether this is a waste of resources? On the last day, we just went to a shopping mall and watched a movie. I have to say , in GZ, there are indeed a lot of delicious food. My boyfriend is good at choosing the restaurant, he gave me a lovely memory of delicious food while traveling / during my time in GZ. Every day , at the lunch and dinner time, I always said:” wa~~ Baby, this is so yummy , and I will become a fat girl if you continue to let me eat great food.” Then he watched me and he smiled and said ” yes , that’s my wish.” That’s so lovely.

Grammar

I know that your name is Essie
I have a pen that / which is black.

I left you with sth – I went and the cake was remaining
I left the house at 9AM – I went out
The cake was left – the cake was remaining

I took – specific past time, not a period of time
I was taking – period of time in the past
eg. While Jesse and Essie were having class, Zoe walked in

I had class
I was having class

travel (v) – verb
traveling (v/n) – the process
trip (n)- from A to B

I don’t fear about speaking – I don’t fear speaking / I’m not scared of speaking