OpenF2F Class Notes (Celeste)***

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I was walking when a cockroach landed on my head.  – I was walking and a cockroach landed on my head.
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I was taking a shower when my phone rang. – I was taking a shower and my rang.
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Yesterday I was working on my computer when my VPN stopped/died or cut out many times. – Yesterday I was working on my computer but my VPN stopped…

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Last night I was working out when a group of teenagers made a lot noise. –  Last night when I was working out a group of teenagers made a lot of noise and monoplized every machine/all the machines/ many machines/almost all of the machines. 

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I was walking here when I thought a…

When i was walking here i thought “this chineses exasperate me”. I know we are different culture but why when the traffic light is green for pedestrian, the cars, buses, scooters or bicycles try to run over you? I walk 30 minutes to come here and today when a cross the street one bus drove faster and stopped 50 centimeters to me, i was very afraid. 5 minutes after that, i cross another street and it’s a scooter pass in front of me and touched my hand. i was surprise because i checked the vehicles arrived for the right side and it arrived for the left side. I think you can died easily in China and many times like a cat.

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When i was walking here i thought “Chinese exasperate me”. I know we have different cultures but why when the traffic light is green for pedestrians, the cars, buses, scooters or bicycles try to run you over? I walk 30 minutes to come here and today when I crossed the street one bus drove faster and tried to cut me off

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stopped 50 centimeters to me, i was very afraid. 5 minutes after that, i cross another street and it’s a scooter pass in front of me and touched my hand. i was surprise because i checked the vehicles arrived for the right side and it arrived for the left side. I think you can died easily in China and many times like a cat.