OpenF2F Class Notes 20th December (Celeste) [3]

Writing exercise

Edited

I think sometimes in magazines, so many black girls in the pictures have kinky hair but sometimes there are many white girls who also have wavy hair and sometimes I think when asian girls get up in the morning their straight hair can also be frizzy, so I think the idea that all the white girls and asian girls have straight hair is a stereotype and that’s why some poster of hair products that show the people of many different races, are influential.

Upgraded vocabulary

I think sometimes on the cover of magazines, so many black women in the pictures have natural hair but there are many women who also have relaxed hair. Sometimes there are many white girls/women who also have beachy hair. Sometimes I think when Asian girls get up in the morning their stick-straight hair/flat hair can also be untamed/wild/unruly, so I think the idea that all the white and Asian women have straight hair is a stereotype. That’s why some advertisements/promotions that show the people of many different races, are admirable/beautiful/thought provoking.

wild = untamed