Open Review 13th October (Celeste/Tony)

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Two weeks ago, I had a experience about read Tarot. The augur is a very mature woman who is looks can be trust. First she read my constellation and explained my personality, she said I’m a mystery person and people hard to get close to me, I’m so agree with her because I really think that’s who I am…
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Two weeks ago, I had an experience with Tarot reading. The augur was a very mature woman who looks trustworthy. First she read my constellation and explained my personality, then she said I’m a mysterious person and it’s hard for people to get close to me. I really agree with her because I think that’s who I am…

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