Open F2F Class Notes 12th March (Tony) [W]

Vocabulary

had some trouble

take the chance to have class

weekdays – monday to friday

eg: “I found it’s hard to book class on weekdays.”

weekends – saturday and sunday

eg: “I usually sleep in on the weekends.”


Writing exercise

Original –

My current company has a lot of problems to be improved.For example, the creative team is not stronger, and internal management is not well organized. I usually feel not comfortable for these problems, but my boss ask me to stay here through the promission of promotion and salary rise for me. however, I felt more and more unhappy, my promotion application didn’t approved by headquarter. So, I decided to resign the current job.
I am looking forward a higher position of account manager in another company. The new company and the old one may be the same industry. My ideal company should has good work atmosphere and nice colleagues with professional work attitude.That will make our cooperation more smoothly. The work scope of the bussiness should be more comprehensive , so that i can learn more new knowledge and skills. But at the same time, I should take more responsibilities for account manager. I need to work as a team leader, have strong leadership ability.
that might be a challenge for me, but i am confident with my ability.

Correction

My current company has a lot of issues that need to be improved. For example, the creative team is not strong, and internal management is not well organized. I usually feel  uncomfortable about these issues, but my boss asked me to stay here by promising me a promotion and a raise. However, I felt more and more unhappy, my promotion application wasn’t approved by headquarters. So, I decided to resign from my current job.
I am looking forward to a higher position of account manager in another company. The new company and the old one may be in the same industry. My ideal company should have a good work atmosphere and nice colleagues with professional work attitudes. That will make our work go more smoothly. The scope of the work at the business should be more comprehensive , so that I can learn more new knowledge and skills. But at the same time, I should take more responsibilities as an account manager. I need to work as a team leader and have strong leadership.
That might be a challenge for me, but i am confident.

Homework

Summarize the article –

No more than six sentences.

http://www.51voa.com/VOA_Special_English/los-angels-permits-people-to-sell-goods-on-the-sidewalks-74292.html