Online Class Notes (Li)[W]

Finish this reading https://breakingnewsenglish.com/2009/200906-bodybuilder-sushi.html

Write down your thoughts for this reading? What’s the article about? What’s interesting about this article?

Vocabulary

bond – ties/relationship with others

ex. The couple has a special bond.

theme song – 主题曲

real – adj 

ex. This experience is so real!

really – adv 

ex. This tastes really good.

admire – sbd who you look up to

ex. Everyone admires him for his talents.

ex. The chairman admires people who are outstanding in their area.

Grammar

relation – how people connect to or behave with each other/how things connect or relate to each other

ex. These two companies have developed friendly relations with each other.

ex. Does this case have any relation to the crime that took place last month?

relationship – the way in which two things are connected

ex. What is their relationship like?

ex. Nobody knew of their relationship until it was reported in the news.

if you talk about 1 thing – use “it” 

if you talk about many things – use “they” 

i went to a photography exhibition which topic is about regular customer before yesterday, the photographer is also went there. i don’t acknowledge him before , this is his first photography exhibition in his life, he tell us why he named this exhibition as “regular customer” – although we can’t stay a place forever,at least we can become its regular customer and built a special tie with it,these works are taken by him and his grandma, he also describe the background of these photos. he is very young and cute, i thought his age is only little older than me, in fact he is already 34 years old ,it is a real surprised to me. he is also a singer ,he has a group what is named 好妹妹，when it finished , i heard his songs from app, it sounds a real nice especially is the regular customer what is 主题曲 of this exhibition and pink 海洋馆. i always recycle these two song these days and i bought his book of regular customer, all in all at finally he has become a person who i adored in my heart and he is the youngest among the person who i adored .

Revised: 

I went to a photography exhibition which topic is about “regular customers” before yesterday. The photographer is also went there. I didn’t know him from before,  this is his first photography exhibition in his life, and he told us why he named this exhibition as “regular customer”. Although we can’t stay at a place forever, at least we can become its regular customer and built a special tie/bond with it. These works are taken by him and his grandma, he also explained the background of these photos. He is very young and cute. I thought his age is only a little older than me, in fact, he is already 34 years old. It is a real surprise to me. He is also a singer and he is in a group what is named 好妹妹. When the exhibition ended, I heard his songs from an app. They sound really nice/good, especially is the “Regular Customer” which is the theme song of this exhibition and “Pink Ocean Park“. I always listen to these two songs these days and I bought his book called “Regular Customer”. All in all, at finally he has become a person whom I adore in my heart and he is the youngest among the people whom I adore.

*Capitalise the first word of every sentence

*”I” is always capitalised

*Use “” (quotation marks) + Capitals when you mention names of songs, books, tv shows, cafes, restaurants

*Break your sentences into shorter sentences – when it’s too long, stop adding commas