Online Class Notes (Li)[W]

Write a story about your nieces. What are they like? Did something funny ever happen before?

Vocabulary

bad – level 1

worse – level 2

worst – level 3

awful/terrible/disgusting – level 5

airport: 机场

train/bus/police/fire/subway/metro/petrol/gas station

spend time with her/accompany her

Grammar

Transition words – however/furthermore/on the hand/also/in addition

usually has a comma (,) after the word

However, I often tell my friends to smoke in the smoking area.

On the other hand, smoking should be banned in public.

Verbs expressing the same idea in a sentence should have the same form

eg. I don’t like behaviours such as spitting, littering and smoking. 

eg. I like to eat, sleep and drink. 

except for: 

past continuous +simple past – when one action takes place at the same time as the other existing action 

eg. She was eating her lunch when her mother came home.

eg. The driver was talking on the phone when the boy got hit by the car.

I don’t like the behavior such as spitting and litter, and now I really don’t like the behavior which is smoke in public,especially this year.

The environment is so terrible and because of the COVID-19 we have to wear a mask everyday.But there are still some people smoke in public such as in air station or on the street.

I don’t like this behavior but I couldn’t do anything.They smoke in public prove that they don’t care other people’s feelings and also don’t care their health. So when I meet these people, I often keep far away from them because I am not sure wether they would hit me if I stop them smoking in public.However I often tell my friends who like smoking that they can smoke in the area where is allowed,and it is better for them to give up smoking if they can do it.

Revised: 

I don’t like behaviours such as spitting and littering, and now I really don’t like the behavior which is smoking in public, especially starting from this year.

The environment is terrible and because of the COVID-19, we have to wear a mask every day. But, there are still some people who smoke in public such as in an airport or on the street.

I don’t like this behavior but I couldn’t do anything. Smoking in public proves that they don’t care about other people’s feelings and they  also don’t care about their health. So when I meet these people, I often keep a distance/maintain a distance from them because I am not sure whether they would hit/attack me if I stop them smoking in public. However, I often tell my friends who like smoking that they can smoke in the smoking area, and it is better for them to give up smoking if they can.