Online Class Notes (Li)[W]

Write a paragraph about your work life.

Vocabulary

whine: when you complain or express disappointment or unhappiness repeatedly like a child 不停地嘀咕，哼哼唧唧

eg. You need to stop whining like a child!

Grammar

train her independently to by herself – train her to deal with situations independently 

when with her dad she can do things by herself – she can do things by herself when she is with her dad 

take care her – take care of her

watch the pictures – look at the pictures

she likes to running – she likes to run 

Fight, cry, hug and laugh

I love my daughter, sometimes I hope she can grow up to be a princess. I would like to protect her. Sometimes, I would like her to become a fighter who can face tough situation independently. Don’t need…My daughter don’t like to face challenges so she will cry and struggle at me. I guess she don’t like a mother like me who will ask her to face challenges by herself. I just stand back and look at her with a smile and deliver a strong signal that ‘ mum believe you’. When I decided that she can deal with everything better than my thought, she becomes more positive and more confident.

Revised: 

I love my daughter, sometimes I hope that she will grow up to be a princess. I would like to protect her. Sometimes, I would like her to become a fighter who can face tough/challenging situations independently. My daughter doesn’t like to face challenges so she will cry and whine at me. I guess she doesn’t like a mother like me who will ask her to overcome difficulties on her own. I just stand back and look at her with a smile and give her a strong signal that means/shows ” mum believes you”. When I can see/am convinced that she can deal with everything better than I thought, she will become more positive and more confident.