Online Class Notes (Li)[W]

Vocabulary

bankrupt: 破产

eg. Small businesses might go bankrupt this year if the coronavirus continues to affect everyone.

“Name” – Speech marks

used to show that this is the name of a book, restaurant movie etc.

Bad – 1

Okay  – 2

Satisfactory – 3

Very good – 4

Excellent – 5

Grammar

ask me to involve in these meetings  – asked me to participate in these meetings

the deadline is tighted – the deadline is tight 

everything you need to analysis and give conclusion – you need to analyse and provide suggestions for everything 

need more manpowers – need more manpower/assistance  

layout – layoff 

our company will be change new system – our company will implement a new system 

when I back from – when I came back/flew back from

Writing

It was nice to have lunch with my colleagues at the restaurant ShunFengGangWan. We booked a private room on the 38F which can be rotated, then we can see the river at different angles during the meal. In addition the food was delicious, especially for the dessert. The service was also very satisfactory. The only disappointment was the inconvenient traffic, it’s hard to call a taxi and took long time on the way. But anyway, we enjoyed the meal.

Revised: 

It was nice to have lunch with my colleagues at the restaurant, “ShunFengGangWan”. We booked a private room on the 38th floor which can rotate, so we can see the river from different angles during the meal. In addition, the food was delicious, especially for the dessert. The service was also above average/very good/almost excellent. The only disappointment was the location, it’s hard to call /book a taxi and it took a long time to get there. But anyway, we enjoyed the meal/we had a good time.