Online Class Notes (Li)[S/W]

Grammar

has vs. have 

has – singular

The child has blue eyes and brown hair

have – plural 

They have a lot of money

But, on Friday I went out with my friends. We had dinner. About one and a half years. Yes, because of my health I don’t eat much food than before. They’re friends from middle school. I have a little bored walk around. But, I feel excited because it’s no long time to meet my friends. I was excited.

I think she like because if she don’t like she should change her job. I said the next time I go to hospital in September.

Revised: 

But, on Friday I went out with my friends. We had dinner. We finally met/hang out again after about one and a half years. Yes, because of my health I don’t eat much food than before/I eat less food that before/now. They’re friends since middle school. I feel a little/bit bored walking around. But, I feel excited because it’s been a long time since I last saw my friends. I was excited.

I think she likes it/her job because if she doesn’t like it she should change her job. I said the next time I will go to the hospital in September.

It is about the coconut island was a beautiful island before which has coconut palms, golden beaches and clear blue sea . Nowadays it becomes more different than before. the beach is never empty in the whole day because more and more people like to go to there enjoy their holiday and the hotels are very expensive. the local people who is old man or children is not any more free such as the children no longer ride bicycle because it is not safe . but the local seller seems very happy

Revised: 

It is about the coconut island which was a beautiful island before because it had coconut palms, golden beaches and clear blue sea . Nowadays it has become a tourist destination. So the beach is never empty in the whole day because more and more people like to go there to enjoy their holiday and the hotels have become very expensive. The old men and children try to cross the street but it’s no longer a quiet street, it’s a busy one so they no longer have freedom. But, the local seller seems very happy because more and more people can buy their products.