Online Class Notes (Li)[S]

Summarising texts and reading comprehension

Vocabulary

ill/sick/unwell

eg. I’m ill today.

eg. I didn’t go to school today because I’m unwell.

clue/hint

eg. Can you give me a clue?

Grammar

she’s happy and no happy – she’s happy and not unhappy/she’s both happy and unhappy at the same time 

everywhere she looks there’s chocolates – wherever she goes there’s always chocolate available to buy/in abundance 

I help to give her more delicious food than chocolate and she will don’t chocolate. I think the dumpling is more delicious than the chocolate. I think don’t give her money and she cannot any chocolates so she cannot eat chocolate at home.

She is worried about she’s health. There’s a lot of sugar in chocolates and there’s also a lot of fat. She also gets spots on face and she’s a little overweight.

I not always go fishing but I like to fishing. Because fishing can make me so happy. Last year the one month, I start fishing. I went to a garden to fishing. The garden is 专门 for fishing. Very old people tell me how to fish. I eat the fish.

Revised: 

I would help her by giving her food that is more delicious than chocolate so that she won’t eat any more chocolate. I think dumplings are more delicious than chocolate. I think you should not give her money so that she cannot buy any chocolates to eat chocolate at home.

She is worried about her health. There’s a lot of sugar in chocolates and there’s also a lot of fat. She also gets spots on her face and she’s a little overweight.

I don’t always go fishing but I like fishing because fishing can make me very happy. Last year January, I started fishing. I went to a fishing garden. The garden is specifically for fishing. An old man taught me how to fish. I ate the fish afterwards. 

Pronunciation

happier – hair -pee- yer

machines – ma-sheens